Yay! Tohru escaped!

...You, my friend, officially fall under the category of "A Sadistic Writer". Why? Why the hell would you put Tohru through all this... ? Seriously? Anyway, update Sooooooooon!

;D

awww tohru is so brave! kick that mother fuckers ass tohru! xx

I've read this fanfic before and I don't give a D*** if I'm only 12, but this fanfic is GREAT!

Pretty good. I would have had Tohru take martail arts lessons with Kyo and Kagura. I know its not in her nature to fight but the girl needs to learn how to defend herself. I also would have had Ayame hunt down those bleeping idiots and kill them. Think about it. Hes the snake right? He can transform, strangle thier necks and sink his venom into them. Perfect revenge! You cant arrest a snake. It would be considered an act of nature.

write more!

It's funny, *Holds back laughter* Ryoko means 'Intruder' in Japanese!

Great story! You kept everyone but Tohro out of OOCness.

FYI: Tohro will never swear.

Ever.

*Chomps on cookie* Hafe youf quifted thif ftory? You've haven't updated in...

However long it's been...

im confused is akito a man or a woman?

Wow... such a great story... more chapters PLEASE!x3

Please continue soon! I love it so far, and u havent updated in forever and wah! Pretty pretty please!

I really hope we have a snow day tommorow so I can read it!

OMG It's so good!

GO TOHRU!

Long time no see girlie!

Hope you're doin alright :)

Awesome chappie and I totally understand the oocness.

Anyone would act out of character if they were going through what they were.

Please keep up the great work and update when you can.

Take care!

Chuni

Awe how sad this is really good and emotional! Poor Tohru, poor boys! Awe D: But this is really well written it definitley goes in deep with the reader!

U gotta do the next chapter. Ur killin me here. I really want to know what happens

Yeah, those little dialogues with Kyo are extremely annoying. It also detracts from the seriousness of the story.