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kiki
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
hi, pudding, na no da. *drinks gallon of coke* SUGAR RUSH! WOOHOO, NA NO DA! PLEASE UPDATE, NA NO DA!
Karin
2008-07-22 . chapter 1
It was assowme! But next time make the story of Pudding and tart happen some weeks after Tokyo mew mew a la mode!
shika127
2008-03-15 . chapter 1
does pudding really refer her self as the third person and say na no da? o well who cares it was a cute story
ALL4PUDDINGTART
2007-09-04 . chapter 1
I BET TAR-TAR LOOKS KUTE AS A HUMAN X3

WOW!
PUDDING MADE FRIENDS WITH 'SEN-SEN' PRETTY QUICKLY 0.o
zovesta
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
“We have to chop off your ears!” Kish exclaims.

“WHAT!” Tart almost jumps from shock.
:XD, added part:

"Yes! Your wonderful alien ears!" Kishu drags on.

Taruto grabs his ears and runs. Pai tosses the butcher knife and walks away disappointed.
:done:
I love this story! But I have to give some advice, you're waay to short for different parts. Everything goes to quickly, maybe try making every part of the story longer? Update soon please!
Alyssa
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
good start. but PLEASE update soon, its been like FOREVER. nice crack at mew mew power, too. ^_^
Mina
2007-05-15 . chapter 1
It's been a long time since you've updated, would you please update this fic though?
ILiketospin
2007-04-25 . chapter 1
Great Job! please update soon!!
kitkatkitten444
2007-03-21 . chapter 1
i like it so much... i no y he feels bad... i think!! write more! =3
Katie Inez Dagona
2006-12-19 . chapter 1
yay you rock
moonshinegal
2006-11-25 . chapter 1
That was adorable! I would think it would be funnier if Taruto still looked like himself even as a human and then Pudding would find out! xD Then chaos would break xD Wait, in your writing IS Taruto supposed to look like himself or totaly different? Update soon! ~*Moonshine*~
romancerox
2006-11-03 . chapter 1
u havent updated for a while, i hope u do. this plot is very good, i hope u continue. cant wait!
i am no one and i stand alone
2006-08-19 . chapter 1
great!
Demetra Vassiliki
2006-08-14 . chapter 1
What?!?! That's all PLEASE complete it it started so well!
Drifting One
2006-07-26 . chapter 1
Haha! I loved it! Please continue! *gets tackled by readers*

Reader # 1: What do you mean? You have to finish your story! Stop reading and go write! NOW! **

me: Eh... Kay? 0_0' well, I did love this!
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