Nice! Great work!

good use of repitition! i'll review your other poems too!

I like these ones. And i think i figured out the people too.
Golden Eyes: Roy to Ed
Cobalt eyes: Ed to Roy
Amber eyes: Roy to Riza
Seafoam: Riza to ? (I'm not sure..)
Hidden Eyes: Ed to Alphonse
Flower's Eyes: Al to Winry.

Can you tell me if i'm right??

-Spirit.

I liek this story so far,i so confuzzled on who all these people are,I know combalt is Roy,and ember Ed,but who is everyone else?

omg!who was it writen by tell me!oh yeah nice poem^^