I like this story! I really wish you would continue this story starting with that fluffy chapter you have promised, preferably with that second 'real man' idea...heh...please?

oh yeah the "dive in like a real man bit hell to all the consequences angle" is what i want

NO! ANOTHER cliffhanger! *throws trantrum*

This is too much for meh.

Can't wait for this to really get into it. I'm spazzing here, going nuts for good POTC fics.

I'm obsessed and you're increasing the level of said obsession.

*happy bunny*
Ever since I saw the 2nd movie I've been dying for some fanfiction (Jaxk/Liz, of cource) and it is so gracious of you to provide it- and of such high calibre as well!
Carry on the good work!

Interesting so far

ud soon

Very good...shame they got arrested, though. I mean, I would've loved to have seen some good JE fluff with the reunion...but I guess that that would be just too...fairytale-ish. Well, great work, can't wait for you're update!

Tortuga is now under control under the east india trading company. How dare you be so mean! No, i'm just kidding...it makes it all the funnier!

I thought the stories were really good...i liked the first one best though...and i qoute, 'now with any luck, there'll be rum.' I thought that was funny. Keep up the good work!

"...but after the end of DMC, I think we know that this is nothing." Agreed. *raises bottle of rum*

Overall, I think your work so far is fantastic. I haven't noted any spelling or grammar errors yet, so you're doing a wonderful job of revising everything before you put it on here.

I cannot wait to read more... I'm bloody well hooked. XP *pokes* Now ye better keep to your promise of a chapter a day. You have a new fan and she's chomping at the bit for more. XD

Ah! He..was...just...about...to...see...Liz! Argh! And I will complain about the cliffie (though you have a point, after DMC, it was nothing). So here it goes.

I HATE CLIFFIES!

Okay, now that we have put that behind us, I love this chapter! Good, very good, but I've no idea how Jack and Lizzie will get themselves out of this one...I really love the last line, so in character..."Oh, bugger." Brilliant, can't wait for the next update!

Well, color me intrigued. I'm definitely curious as to where you'll take this. I'm especially curious as to how you'll handle Jack and Liz meeting again, after what she's done. I've fallen in love with that pairing...

Thanks for writing,

Jade C.

Fantastic so far! I've only got one other fanfiction myself, so I kind of know where you're coming from.

Your grammer, spelling, structure, plot... it's all bloody perfect so far. I have no notes, though if you would LIKE criticism, I'll dig. :P I really cannot wait to read more. I'm stoked. :)

This is a great story...I love the last paragraph with Elizabeth thinking. Can't wait for next update!