Great job.

Wow, this was a great story. Got Jack down pretty well ;)

And I love that Daniel's voice is his concious. LOL

Wow. This was a very interesting insight on Jack. I liked the soldier side of him and the humane side of him collading. Daniel played a nice part as his conscience. :) Well done, I enjoyed it very much.

Nicely done. I like that the voice in Jack's head (both the merely annoying nagging one and the little pricks of conscience) is Daniel's. You've made acute observations of the little, gradual changes in Jack and Daniel's personalities, and observation of detail always makes for a better story. Likewise for "Glasses."

Amazing.....nuff said

Sad. So sad. So very very sad. Tears.

I thought this was a very well written story.

Good story. wonderful characterization. I could really see Jack in that situation. Thanks for sharing it with us!

excellent writing, meaningful plot
i enjoyed it

Wow...This is...excellent. My eyes were tearing up...I really have to hand it to you here :). This is very moving and the emotion is palpable. I love it. Keep this up, 'cause you've just gotten yourself a fan...

Excellent story. Good point of view. Thanks for writing that.

Ok, normally a story just focusing on Jack really doesn't interest me, but that was.......awesome. I was engrossed....lol I loved all the emotions and inner thoughts, and the fact that Jack was trying to spare Daniel from "the dirty work"...you're really a great author. :)

WOW! This is an intense story! On the sad side. Sorry that the young Jaffa died after all. A trip into the mind of Jack O'Neill. Not as scary as one might imagine. And people think that all that Jack has on his mind is pizza, beer, and hockey. But now we know why he keeps his mind on pizza, beer, and hockey. Good Job!