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| demolished-soul 2008-04-21 ch 98,  | abuseAww, Flack grocery shopping. =P That would be really funny if an episode started like that and Flack had to stop to catch a bad guy in the store! Great chapter! |
| sparkyCSI 2008-04-18 ch 98, | abuseNice little fluff chapter. It's good to see them do the day to day things. It makes them more believable as a couple! Can't wait for more! |
| Bec0512 2008-04-17 ch 98, | abuseReally loving this story and can't wait for more. |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-04-16 ch 98, | abusegreat chapter! can't wait for more |
| PadfootCc 2008-03-21 ch 97, | abuselove the story! i cannot wait to read more! |
| Aphina 2008-03-20 ch 24, | abuseThis was a nice follwo upp chapter, it was good to see the effects of what happened with her dad. it's nice to get sme sense of normacley between these two again. |
| Aphina 2008-03-20 ch 23, | abuseThis really moved me, I could feel Emma's rejection sting, and then Don's over welming need to help her was beautiful, you wrote this chapter amazibglky, it contained so muh emotion. |
| Aphina 2008-03-20 ch 22, | abuseHey, I thought this chapter was fantastic. I really loved this chapter and the little touches an theings that revelaed his feelings. The last lines really set evrything in motion! |
| Aphina 2008-03-20 ch 21, | abuseHey, the kiss was really sweet and hot, your making us wonder if it happened. I think it's very engaging to see Flack in this kind of environment. Esp how reacted to people, it was cool to get some back ground. |
| Aphina 2008-03-20 ch 20, | abuseI think thisis going to be interesting seeing Flack amongst her fmnaily. i had a giggle over thje whole mebarrasing family thting. it is so true which nakes it mor realistic. |
| Aphina 2008-03-18 ch 17, | abuseHey I lvoed these last few chapters. I'm glad to see him kick CHris to the Kerb she was freakishly annoying. I do love Emma, I like the way tyou've created their friendship it seems completely natural and I like the fact we see both points of view. Your doing fab work on this story. |
| Aphina 2008-03-18 ch 12, | abuselmao , the last few chapters have been untterly stunning, I love Emma as an OC and I can't wait to read more. I'm trying to make head way through this tionight! |
| Aphina 2008-03-18 ch 6, | abuselol I'm going to review slectiv chapters unfortunately. But I am reading it. I love learning about the two of them and seeing how their relaitonhip devleopes, this is a fab story! |
| Aphina 2008-03-18 ch 2, | abuseI think this is a fab way of showing us how their relattionship has developed over the past few years. It seems like the wrong time in life for them to hook up and Flack made the right decsion. |
| Aphina 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseHey I just started reading this, I really liked your first chapter lol. She really did put him in his place! |