keep up the good work

i like it no i love it mak love ur stories

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hey, just a suggestion. But have someone edit your story. I would probably be a good read if it was edited. There are a lot of grammatical mistakes and stuff that make it really hard to read.

Dude, that was so awsome. I loved it. Especially that Kikyo and Naraku were arrested at the end, that just made my day. Ugh I hate Kikyo and Naraku, they mess up everything good. But in your story they rot in jail, so i'm happy. But there is one thing that i have to criticize you on. You might want to go back and re-read the story, because there are some places in there that when i read it, it didn't really make sence, so i had to go back and read it a few more times. I don't know maybe it's nothing, and i just read slow. LOL! I just thought that you might want to go and take a look at that. Well... I love your story, and i'll lok for more stories that you write, cause i'm really into this whole present-day Inuyasha stuff that people have been writing. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

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haha another really great chapter! great story as well! laters

ne neer inuyasha has to pay for everything!lol that was a great chappie update soon!

I have a question. If Kagome cannot here what is she doing in a school where the teachers talk? Or is the not hearing thing a one day thing because she forgot her hearing aid? And do you proof read? It would really help. You have a great idea but the grammar, and spelling errors are a bit distracting.

LOVED IT! IT WAS A NICE LYTTLE EPILOGUE.

They bonded over basketball. This is a great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. _

cute lil chapter you have here! can't wait to read the next! update again soon! :)

really cool plz update soon! BASH KIKYO! lol ;P

*Stelina Miko Kistune*

loved it!

It was good! Plz update soon, im glad dey all made up!

great