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| Sunruner 2008-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseAh! Finally something introspective for Ivan that isn't horrendously written! Quite the opposite, really. ^__^ I'm so glad I found this: I like the character building on the relationships as well, the game really seems to ignore Hammet after the first book, but I think Ivan had it harder than anyone D: |
| Ashka-chan 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abuseIt's really nice... |
| helium lost 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseHow is it that you write for all the fandoms I like/liked? XD Anyway, the first drabble is lovely—fantastically written; descriptive and introspective without being self-pitying. Also, the line "people liked things that had no use" is -so- true; I have tons and tons of junk all over my house XD I like how you did your descriptions in I; they're vivid, yet concise. Though I don't remember adepts being condemned in the GS world, but, then again, I haven't played in probably more than a year @_@; Your use of italics in IV is done well, too, as it is in II; it shows how Ivan is reminiscing without plunging him into your usual cliche introspection :P I -love- the closure in VI; it ends very nicely and wraps up the continuity of the fic perfectly. ^^ Beautifully, beautifully written; this will stay on my favorites for quite a while :) - hl |
| Spirit Seer 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseHey, this is nice! :D I really liked it; the last sentence especially, about how there's nothing wrong with having two homes? I loved it!! Nice job! I really like this :D |
| SilverFinDragon 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abusenice story, sligthly hard to understand because of the changes in the times but still really beautifully written, =) |
| Hawki 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautifully written. Truely insightful. |