On chapter 9, I fail to understand why Hammy and the Madagasgar bunch could not intervene when they saw RJ fighting the rat. But besides that, I've manages to catch up with reading your story. Hooray for me, I guess.

Where's the rest of it? I love it! Continue! Oh please continue! :-)

I love it!

Keep writing!

The pacing has quickend a bit, but it is still good. Once again, you show off your ability to tell multilayered stories. Of course, learning the truth about RJ's past won't improve his relationship with the other animals and I hope RJ has some clever plan up is sleeve.

PLease! Right more! Sorry i reveiw too much...

Not bad.

Oh my, RJ is in over his hedge (I mean head) here. Is he going to runaway? Is he surrendering himself to Killer? This story just keeps getting darker and darker with some soft-core yaoi put in. An odd combination, but that just makes it all the more interesting. I anticipate it's only going to get more interesting when the Madagasgar animals become more involved in the story.

Awesome!

Why is it that there's usually a silent O at the beginning of opossum and yet there are people who omit the O like you did.

I'm impressed that you've posted this story so quickly. You've certainly captured the persona of these characters perfectly.

Mind putting a little more of the opossums if it is their right part? Overall.. UPDATE SOON! COOL STORY!

Nice Chapter.

Do they all get a one way ticket to the island or is it more focused on RJ and the bird?

This is getting good!

I can't wait for more!

Update! update! It will be really cool for them to meet! Madagascar gang and the hedgies, AWESOME!