An interesting short piece on Chloe's inner psyche, and it's dead on. You know... if your boss keeps promising to make her your life partner, yet sends her away to cozy up to "the other candidate" for a couple of years... shouldn't you start to suspect something already? Like, wait a sec... this don't add up LOL

I am not a Chloe fan myself but I do agree she was used. I thought you did a very good job of describing Chloe's feelings. This was such a graceful and pretty piece. Kudos!

*grumbles at the stupid glitch that wouldn't let her review earlier* YES! Beautiful characterization of Chloe. For someone who isn't fond of her, you have a nice grasp on her feelings and a wonderful way of writing them. Yay for long trainrides, if this is what they produce. ^^