 C.B.A 2006-07-17 . chapter 1This was a cute and short story. I like the whole concept, plus Euroshiping is always fun, although I have two suggestions. If you ever were to rewrite this, maybe you should have Kaiba notice Bakura still glancing at him as he walks away. Then you should have Kaiba have a couple of random thoughts about his meeting, then have the story end with Kaiba thinking a random thought about Bakura. I think it implies that Kaiba is starting think about Bakura, and you know what that means-it'll lead to a potential relationship! I think that by doing this, you'll get the point across a little more clearly. (or the relationship, whatever) Anyway, good job with this! |