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| Master Of Sorrow 2007-10-14 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting pairing, because they are both almost immortal. Nice, but try with more details.. (Like what the bottom of the review submission screen says, I'll give you some advice.) : ) |
| HobbitSizeMe 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE that!! I'm a big J'onn J'onzz fan, and I have to admit, when I went to read your story, I was a little unsure about the whole concept. But you impressed me! It's really well written, it's true to the characters, it's just great. My reaction was "aw". Great job. Awesome!:D |
| Wondergirl75 2006-07-29 ch 1, | abuseI can only say one word: "Wow". |
| RebelAlmazianWarrior 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis first chapter has me thinking. What happens next? I think J'onn/Diana, J'onn/Shayera love stories are great. Keep writing! |