Yet another promising story falls away.

Still, in the midst of this disappointment, I must say that I appreciate the epilogue-ish explanation of what would have happened. It's much better than just silently leaving.

Thank you for this story.

Excellent! The best FanFic (with an alternate reality) that I have read so far! I admit, there is a bit too much violence for my taste, but I will give it 10/10 for now! Don't disappoint me with the ending, though!

What will happen next?! Hurry Up with the next chapie!!

lol this story is so awesome! i luv the characters... I think Brock's my fav character ^^
but what kind of evil do you have in store for them?! ah!

Nice I can see Ash not trusting pokemon yet.

Hi! I was waiting fot this chapter!
It took you a long time!
how long do we have to wait untill the next chapter?
Please update soon!
I'm really looking foward to it

Chears

Sorry, not much to review this time since it was such a slow chapter. I'll review next time when there is much more to review and read.

You updated a while ago, didn't you? Sorry for not reviewing earlier. Wow, it's been a while since I've read this fic.

This makes me wonder: will May give up on Ash? Or is she going to continuing fighting over him with Misty? She was, however, asking for forgiveness. Maybe that's a sign that this whole relationship mess is coming to an end, but maybe it's not.

Seems as if this ff is coming to an end. I shall patiently wait till the very last chapter.

Update soon!

Well, it's nice to see that hatchet buried. And not in someone's head! LOL!! I crack myself up!!

that was hillarious!

Wow very emotional. Poor Ash nice to see pickacu again.

do you think ash feels the same way about misty . he hates melody now RIGHT?!of corse he does he has misty i mean come on !

Very original and creative. I like Ash's reason for joining like how in the original pokemon he wants the be the best pokemon master of them all... or something along those lines. For some reason while the test was correcting i could imagine him in front of the screen.

You're back! Hooray!

Positives:
+ Introduction to new characters, Domino & Dawn.
+ Misty confesses her feelings
+ The chilling upcoming future looks grim for some of our heros.

Negatives:
- You haven't updated in a few months!
- This chapter is good, but after so long of a waiting period, you could of done better.
- Chapter felt short and lacking what could of happen for this chapter

Personal Comments:
* You know, Domino seems to be better as a villian than a hero... unless she is a double agent for Team Rocket and not a Pokemon Lover! That be awesome and it would match her character quite well.

THE ELITE ORGANIZATION OF TEAM ROCKET has a 3 out of 5 and letter grade of B-. This was Jordan R. Was Here being extremely disappointed in your current work. Peace out and rock on Mr. Evil.

Thats a good chapter,and love the ending.I can't wait to see more.