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| Jellicos 2007-02-07 ch 5, | abuseI have to admit, I rarely read stories with OC's joining the CSI crew simply because they tend to get very Mary Sue-ish, but not this one, it's really good! You build up a very sympathetic character; the witty and clumsy Hannah is easy to like and relate to. And I really liked that last line:) Well done! Jellicos |
| gigi2690 2007-01-29 ch 5, | abuseYeah! It makes sense that some stranger has to tell the two of them to get their headds out of the sand. Gigi |
| Nimmireth 2006-09-30 ch 5, | abuseThat was AMAZING! Totally hilarious! Hannah kicks **...wow... |
| Cherrydrops12 2006-09-06 ch 5, | abusesweet |
| Sassefrass 2006-09-01 ch 5, | abuseCute! |
| Kristi-Julie 2006-08-29 ch 5, | abuseohh..i love it! |
| Jorja Rulz 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseAWESOME! So funny! |
| x-sara-x 2006-08-28 ch 5, | abuseI don't have the creativity today to write in code so I'll just say OMG I loved it please write more! lol ;) |
| FallenAngel08 2006-08-28 ch 5, | abusehe he...love the story especially the nicknames..:) |
| clarkson04 2006-08-28 ch 5, | abuselol i like it damn gd chapter to go with a great story please carry on with this as soon as possible xx |
| ButterfliesForHer 2006-08-18 ch 4, | abuseI loved it, I couldnt stop laughing =) Hurry up with the next chapter! |
| Mortaz 2006-07-23 ch 4, | abusemore more more!this story is geart keep going! |
| Sara Lya 2006-07-23 ch 4, | abuseAwesome! Hilarious! really loved that story... And that hannah girl just rocks ^^ Can't wait for that last update :) |
| chawkchic 2006-07-23 ch 4, | abuseTrust me it is funny! Love her not subtle at all way of getting Catherine and Sara to face up to what was really going on between them. |
| Jayne 2006-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseHannah and I speak the same language.. she's a pervert too :p I'm in love with her character!! |