Wow! Awesome story! Thanks for finishing it! Way cool!

Very nice! I love it when an author has taken time to proofread. Even though it's not a "real" story, it's worth it.

I got a little tired of entity Sam following Daniel only, but other than that quibble I really enjoyed this!

Time to look what else you've written!

you're an *excellent* writer! i was totally brought into this fic, and actually a bit sad when it ended.

i wish this had been an sg1 movie, with YOU writing it. about the only thing i'd change is sam and jack kissing at the end. :p

thank you for the wonderful fic! :)

Quite a ride !

This is such a great story! I'm so glad you were able to finish it. Hope you will keep writing fanfic. You have such a great grasp of characters, and what they're thinking - really get into their heads well, and provide motivations to their actions. And you're wonderfully creative!

Best wishes!

Wonderful story! Thanks. (Selfishly, I wish that Carter would remember Jack as someone she loved.)

Thank You.

very nice - very intelligently written.

Interesting story, loved the characters and the ending thanks for sharing.

Lovely story. Thank you.

Excellent, well written, thank you!

Wonderful! Great story, great ending. Thanks so much for sharing it.

This was wonderful! Thank you!

Very exciting! What now?

Wow what an exciting chapter! When Jacob was late I just knew it had to be Anubis. I'm sure hoping our heroes survive.

A truly fascinating and very well written story. I'm very mucy enjoying it. :)