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Regency
2009-12-20 . chapter 14
Well, this story is pretty badass. Really badass, as a matter of fact. I just really love it. I don't know what else to say.
Jen
2009-11-07 . chapter 14
This is a really brilliant fic-great plot and characterisation. I hope you manage to get the final chapters written in the end, I'm sure there are lots of people who want to know how it ends! I'll keep an eye out for updates; please don't give up on finishing this story :)
Sammyfan
2009-09-02 . chapter 14
I just found and read this. Its briliant. Please update soon.
Starlad
2009-07-15 . chapter 14
I have enjoyed this story greatly so far. Please update soon!
Silverishmoon
2009-06-21 . chapter 14
I love this chapter, is there going to be another?
SG4ever
2009-06-18 . chapter 14
YAY!

She's BACK!
samfan9
2009-06-18 . chapter 14
I love your amnesic Sam. She has a quirky sense of humour and that's so Amanda. Can't wait to read about her homecoming. Great job!! Thanks for the regular and quick update.
LozzieLiz
2009-06-18 . chapter 14
Wonderful chapter. Im so glad that Sam is back. I cant wait to learn of Jack's reaction when he finds out... hopefully there will be some shippy goodness (*hint hint*)
Zoser
2009-06-17 . chapter 14
Oh let's do bring her back and give Jack quite a surprise as well as the rest of the SGC. Great chapter!
Anonymous
2009-06-13 . chapter 13
Best chapter yet, in my opinion.
Jeanniewal
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
I always think it's terribly rude to add a story to my alerts and/or Favourite Stories list, and then not pop in to say hi! This is the first time I've come across this story - I read about half of this chapter and realised I want to read the whole thing...at leisure. Hence my saving it. I'll be back when the kids and dog are fed and the weekend well out the way, cup of coffee in hand, to savour and enjoy! See you then.
dp
2009-06-12 . chapter 13
Excellent chapter. More please.
Child-of-the-Dawn
2009-06-12 . chapter 13
O_o eep!

Been following this a while, but the wonderfully done realization Jack has...omg I had to post XD. Love how it all blends together, but we still remember what these people mean to each other. <3
samfan9
2009-06-12 . chapter 13
Wow! You got me hanging literally to the edge of my seat! Wonderful rollercoaster ride. Terrific action. Great chapter! Please please update soon!!
Raskol
2009-06-06 . chapter 12
In which I'm sorely sorry I've never reviewed your stories before, but I just had a mild heart attack after noticing that you've updated, and I thought I should mention this in an actual review instead of lurking around here like some ghost.

[Satya radiated confusion.] - This actually made me snort. Haha. Punny. I love it.

Daniel's spiel on the Swamp Man theory is, quite frankly, fascinating. I've read about it before . . . a year ago, I think (except I was talking about it in relation to Strads, however strange that may sound). Very interesting. I love Daniel's analogy with the quantum mirror and Jack's dismissal of the argument.

Um, I'm a little weirded out by the POV changes sometimes (I remember noticing it in previous chapters too). It's like you switch from omniscient to limited to omniscient and back again. At times, it tends to be distracting because it's like I'm bouncing around from head to head without any warning.

On the other hand, Daniel's language-geeking is great. And your banter is amazing. I mean, your plot's great, but I think your dialogue along with your characterization truly carry the story. You have an astounding grasp on the characters (Daniel in particular, I've noticed). Combine that with your crisp writing style, and this story is just amazing.

I don't have much else to say. Thank you so much for writing. You're truly an inspiration.

--Raskol
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