 Kamalia 2008-01-05 . chapter 1very adorable! and the last sentence made me just melt into a puddle of goo. "maybe there was a higher power after all" aw! |
 elianthos 2006-07-18 . chapter 1lalala, as I promised, here I came. ^_^
wait... *tickles bara-ko so that she's not throttling you anymore*
yes, a lovely piece indeed. me loves the angst ;). And a bit of tought-out reflections don't hurt either. And the end was just right. Really, Mamo-chan shines at his brightest when he suffers/muses/broods/and realizes Usagi, in her many forms, is just his light. And your trademark 'rose from his bloodstream' is just ... gah!... good.
Sorry the review hits for this is low. If it's any consolation, the co-written piece by Nimbi and me got three reviews so far too ^.^
good work with 'Haru'! |
 Nimbirosa 2006-07-16 . chapter 1*reads boredly at first, then with rising intrigue and amusement... and dismay* WHY DID YOU STOP, YOU **?! *leaps for thy throat* DIE!
Where's the thump-thump? ^^ It's good. Funfun, somewhat abrupt, but fun! And fun! And cute. And I have always loved your in-pain-from-summons Mamoru. They're so pretty when they're in agony of spirit, ne? *cackles maniacally* Maniacal is such a cool word. Liek, yoez. Muh-nai-uh-kuhl. Maniacal. WHE! *thump*
- Arashi-chan |
 HermioneCrookshanks919 2006-07-16 . chapter 1Aw, that was so sweet. I really liked it. Short, but wonderfully written (I don't think you could write anything horribly if you tried...). Great job! :-) |
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