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valerie
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
This is just beautiful!
MiakaChan5
2008-09-12 . chapter 1
This is so cute. I'm definatly sending it to my sister. she likes poetry. even though not all of the verses rihmed it was still good. a lil sappy for my but still!
Kievan Rus' Supernova
2008-06-18 . chapter 1
Wow. I don't think i could have rhymed that much for that long. Points to you. It was interesting.
Super-k.
xxxyuniexxx
2008-03-21 . chapter 1
AW
great poem
[i like poems that rhyme so...*humbs up*]
Neutral_Storm
2008-01-06 . chapter 1
Excellent!
potterrules92
2007-02-24 . chapter 1
hey, wow, this poem was amazing! i absolutley loved it! awesome job!
do you think that you could drop by my story and give it a read and review? i'd really appreciate it if you did. =D
Laura
2006-11-17 . chapter 1
He he! Really nice. The rhyming was excelent. Well done.
Suiteki
2006-10-02 . chapter 1
I read this poem once, and now again.
I liked to read it again; you can read it very often
without it getting bored.
This story would be good in story format, too~
I adore it! hehe~
jennifer snape
2006-09-08 . chapter 1
Great! The verse about the Word-of-the-Day calendar, and the lines ‘ I couldn’t make him love me/ simply by trying to/ improve my vocabulary’ were genius! Hehehe.
This bit was so cute:

‘I said I didn’t love you,
but that was a lie.
I can’t live without you,
and I don’t want to try.’

This verse was hilarious:
‘Now, some might want to know
how it came to be
that I was drunk and yet
could speak rationally.’

One wee typo: ‘At the end of the year/ a part was thrown’ (I think you meant ‘party’.

The last three lines were lovely! They made me all squishy and made me go aw!!
valanthe
2006-08-21 . chapter 1
It made me laugh and cry and smile, it's everything a good poem should be.
meikouhaikitsune
2006-07-25 . chapter 1
*le squee* OH.. MEE.. GEE THAT WAS AWESOME Q-CHAN >> aw it was so cute and it was a poem I could never do that. Great job.
Lizzy
2006-07-22 . chapter 1
Very cute. This is the first Snarry poem I've ever read and now I want to go find more.
Elfangor89
2006-07-21 . chapter 1
this is sweet and sounds like doctor sues
SnapesFavorite
2006-07-19 . chapter 1
That was ABSOLUTELY FRIGGING AMAZING!

Thank you for sharing this with us and now excuse me while I go and pick my jaw up from the floor.

I love it!
Naniwoiutennen
2006-07-17 . chapter 1
Adorable... simply adorable...

"THE FORGOTTEN" -Kai aka Naniwoiutennen
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