 valerie 2009-06-12 . chapter 1 This is just beautiful! |
 MiakaChan5 2008-09-12 . chapter 1This is so cute. I'm definatly sending it to my sister. she likes poetry. even though not all of the verses rihmed it was still good. a lil sappy for my but still! |
 Kievan Rus' Supernova 2008-06-18 . chapter 1Wow. I don't think i could have rhymed that much for that long. Points to you. It was interesting.
Super-k. |
 xxxyuniexxx 2008-03-21 . chapter 1AW
great poem
[i like poems that rhyme so...*humbs up*] |
 Neutral_Storm 2008-01-06 . chapter 1 Excellent! |
 potterrules92 2007-02-24 . chapter 1hey, wow, this poem was amazing! i absolutley loved it! awesome job!
do you think that you could drop by my story and give it a read and review? i'd really appreciate it if you did. =D |
 Laura 2006-11-17 . chapter 1 He he! Really nice. The rhyming was excelent. Well done. |
 Suiteki 2006-10-02 . chapter 1I read this poem once, and now again.
I liked to read it again; you can read it very often
without it getting bored.
This story would be good in story format, too~
I adore it! hehe~ |
 jennifer snape 2006-09-08 . chapter 1Great! The verse about the Word-of-the-Day calendar, and the lines ‘ I couldn’t make him love me/ simply by trying to/ improve my vocabulary’ were genius! Hehehe.
This bit was so cute:
‘I said I didn’t love you,
but that was a lie.
I can’t live without you,
and I don’t want to try.’
This verse was hilarious:
‘Now, some might want to know
how it came to be
that I was drunk and yet
could speak rationally.’
One wee typo: ‘At the end of the year/ a part was thrown’ (I think you meant ‘party’.
The last three lines were lovely! They made me all squishy and made me go aw!! |
 valanthe 2006-08-21 . chapter 1It made me laugh and cry and smile, it's everything a good poem should be. |
 meikouhaikitsune 2006-07-25 . chapter 1*le squee* OH.. MEE.. GEE THAT WAS AWESOME Q-CHAN >> aw it was so cute and it was a poem I could never do that. Great job. |
 Lizzy 2006-07-22 . chapter 1 Very cute. This is the first Snarry poem I've ever read and now I want to go find more. |
 Elfangor89 2006-07-21 . chapter 1this is sweet and sounds like doctor sues |
 SnapesFavorite 2006-07-19 . chapter 1That was ABSOLUTELY FRIGGING AMAZING!
Thank you for sharing this with us and now excuse me while I go and pick my jaw up from the floor.
I love it! |
 Naniwoiutennen 2006-07-17 . chapter 1Adorable... simply adorable...
"THE FORGOTTEN" -Kai aka Naniwoiutennen |