 Purple Kunoichi 2007-06-22 . chapter 1I loved this drabble! Great work, and write more drabbles! |
 TheHamsterInMyMind 2007-01-23 . chapter 1I had wondered about that too. That was just so much love. |
 Fishy.Fret 2006-12-09 . chapter 1wow i love this!! you should make something out of this! |
 Das Kasebrot 2006-07-25 . chapter 1Whoa! It's pretty deep! I like it! |
 AnimeFoxy 2006-07-18 . chapter 1oh I love this! this is so cool sounding! Even if it is only a few lines long! AnimeFoxy! |
 rin-ren-ran 2006-07-17 . chapter 1an interesting take on that last episode...
you lost a bit of the mood in the first paragaph when you said 'yet white is often used in situations calling for peace'
it felt a bit too long.
at some point, it felt like reading an encyclopaedia. but other than that, the main idea of the entire fic was shown well.
>> hehehe... bet you thought you wouldnt get so much feedback about something this short, am i right? |
 Yuki Akira 2006-07-17 . chapter 1it so short... *complain* |