wOw, it sounds awesome, it was a VERY differnt p.o.v of how everything works at Oran High School and how things were balenced in the school.
i liked it,and enjoyed reading it.

One of the things I admire most in fanfiction is a sense of balance and a fragile equilibrium which exists despite not being the most convenient arrangement. This fic has managed to nail that perfectly, and maintain a certain elegance at the same time. I had to pause to catch my breath.

This is definitely going on my favourites list.

Wow, that was really well written. I liked how you wrote from all three points of view and how they know but don't really understand. It would be interesting to know what will trigger the eventual change in Tamaki and Kyouy's relationship. Great writing :)

Update soon.

You've got the best grasp on the roles in the Host Club that I've seen! You're definitely spot-on when you say that quite a few of Tamaki's clients 'want him to themselves'. Brilliant fic!

It's alright to be selfish if it means the bishies are happy.

cutes i luve tama and kyo and this is such a uber rare pairing. Write a sequel onegaishimasu ^_^

Ow ow ow. This was beautiful, it caught me right in my chest. What a refreshing take on Tamaki, I found it very believable that he would be so starved for love and accidentally selfish. He was tragic in this, and it worked so well. And Kyouya, oh, Kyouya - "he needs this much more than she does" and it's true, it's so true.

I loved the seamless dancing around the host club does, how they pick up after one another and protect each other - I loved the twins at each of the girl's elbows, how Hunny eats cake he hadn't planned on. This was fascinating and compelling and beautifully written. (With all the talk of stealing hearts and hearts in hands, Tamaki reminded me of Howl, of Howl's Moving Castle :)) Wonderful.

though i gotta say Tamaki isnt selfish...i still luv it!

I really really liked the format of this, and how things just seemed like a puzzle that fit perfectly into itself. However... I was confused at the last part... why Kyouya excused himself, and why he sat with Tamaki for a moment- I mean, for emotional reasons, or just because? @.@ I dunno, it just kinda confused me at the end cause I couldn't understand the exact reasons for the current actions... but I liked it... actually, I think this is the first Mom/Dad I've read, lol, but i like the pairing.

This is really insightful. It's darker than the mood of the seies, but you've caught their dynamic, how each memeber covers for and moves fluidly around the next. Well done!

Ah, this was great! Good job! Pretty true (Except Tamaki and Kyoya in corners. xDD But, hey, whatever floats your boat.), though I slightly disagree about Tamaki being selfish. Oh well, that's just my opinion. This was well-written, and I liked the pattern you used. :D