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| NumairRox14 2008-03-27 ch 2,  | abuseThat was great! totally unexpected!Who would've thought that Numair would wantto sleep in some alley!? Ingenious! |
| Tortall-Obsessed Freak 2008-02-21 ch 2, | abuseNumair should already know about the lower city and the beggars and such, he used to be one of them after he escaped from Carthak; and Numair is kind of ooc. Other than that the stories pretty good |
| Heiress of Lohaust 2007-11-06 ch 2, | abuseShort and rather pointless in my opinion, but that is my opinion, after all. The writing could use some spicing, and some more creativity. and a new lesson. Other than that it was a nice one...sorry, two shot. Heiress |
| yrouna 2007-03-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseIt was a good plot, but there's something wrong with it. I remember that it was mentioned in Emperor Mage that when Numair first went to Tortall, he became a street magician (juggler) and nearly starved. I would think he knows what poor people feel like, seeing that he was one himself. Other than that, I like the message of this story. |
| safeinthedark 2007-03-12 ch 2, | abusei like the idea, but not sure about the use of daine and numair, after all numair lived rough for a long time when he fled carthak |
| Tomoyo Kinomoto 2006-08-17 ch 2, | abuseYour story is fantastic! *speachless* |
| Tomoyo Kinomoto 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseCONTINUE! |
| Zoe the Special girl 2006-07-20 ch 2, | abuselol this is very sad yet good, it makes u think aout he peple that have it reli bad in life |
| Pink Squishy Llama 2006-07-18 ch 2, | abuseYAY! *Huggles Numy* |
| HappeeGoLuckee 2006-07-17 ch 2, | abuseAt least Numair finally learned. I liked it. A lot. |
| me 2006-07-17 ch 2, anon. | abusenumair lived on the streets, living off busking, when he fled Carthak. he isn't so self-centred. |
| Drop Your Oboe 2006-07-17 ch 2, | abuseThe feet were impossible. The feat was impossible. Either way, it's an interesting story. |
| HeadIsInTheClouds 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abusecontinue! keep a' writing please! short but sweet, and that is all i shall say! |
| hotpinkink 2006-07-17 ch 2, | abuseNot Bad! |
| Zoe the Special girl 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abusethis is good lol its quite funi lol i cant believe u 14 lol your writing made me think you were older than me lol but im not much older only 15 :( i was looking at your profile but where abouts in america you live. england sucks lol |