You are the SECOND story to say Hadji is a 'Sultan'. Where is this idea coming from? I'm so curiously confused now! (in the : "Which episode was this in?" way, not the 'i'm so offended' way.)

I liked your story. Typical teens. *Grin*

I liked it! When it comes to the whole spelling of Jonny's name though, there have been times when they've actually spelled it with the 'h'. I agree it does fit better with the 'h'. But I guess it's just been hollywoodized or something.

Cute ficlet, I thought you did a good job on their attitudes :) How about a multi-chapter fic? We sure could use more JQTRA fanfiction . . .

Yeah, Jonny's a real hothead; I can sympathise with Jessie here that he would be allowed to have a signifcant other, but not her. Although, if I recall correctly, in all the hints of relationships in the series, Jessie was the only one who really got jealous. I think it would take Jonny a lot longer to admit his feelings than that; and a lot of other nonsense as well!

Well, if you're in the mood to write some more, I'd like to see what happens next. ;)

this is really sweet. i like it very much!

It's really good. I always enjoy JJ HR.

Short and sweet you should think of writing a prequel