Sasuke is pretty annoyed. he thinks he can will all the same ?

good OS.

I love your writing. The way you display both the want that Sasuke expresses in regards to his revenge and his understanding of the reality of the situation is just great.

So short. So good. I really like the way Sasuke is. As a previous reviewer wrote, I think I like Sasuke's attitude better this way. He's waited for so long, sacrificing EVERYTHING, so it's just FAIR that he can kill a fully capable Itachi. For him atleast. So I think your Sasuke is behaving in a quite (future) canon way. I also like the insight in how the waitress see them. I would love to read a multichapter fic made by you.

Sweet and sadistic. I like it.

Really good! I really like your stories!

sad, but cool.

Ooh. That one hurt. Oh the angst, how you wound me.

Short, but I liked it nonetheless. I can't imagine Sasuke wanting to go through with revenge if Itachi goes blind and that really just kills doesn't it? The misconception of the waitress, and Sasuke grasping Itachi's hand tighter as he muttered to him about things going back to the way they should be soon, were other key points I loved.

So, basically. Awesome job!

u should continue it

short yet substantial, it was good. The "Sasuke ripping Itachi apart on sight" and "Sasuke being unable to kill Itachi" ideas have been overused, and I like this idea.
Some stories can go well with hints of shounen-ai (i dunno... the waitress' comment seemed out of place though that might just be me), but I think this one would be more dramatic if the relationship between Itachi and Sasuke is more platonic than anything else. Why? Because Sasuke helping Itachi apathetically before killing him shows his determination, coldness, and deattachment from his estranged bro.
I know a lot of people might want Sasuke to help out Itachi after being unable to kill him, but that would kill the idea: Sasuke would become OOC (he lives to kill his bro, so why can't he kill him when he gets the chance)and Itachi would just be unhappy to be saved by his foolish otouto.
This story was great as it is. :) Nice

Y'know you should do more about what happens after this, about how maybe if you're looking for cute, how couldn't kill him or if you're not how he did it.

maybe you should continue it. it's good writing. how did he get blind though?