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Balseirocharmed 7/30/10 . chapter 1
Hey this was really a well written piece
Live you life with Love 1/17/10 . chapter 1
WTF?
PagingDoctor502 3/22/08 . chapter 1
That was good. The questions were deep and you could kinda sense that you ask people or yourself those questions too. Great portrayal of the postDesert scene. Keep up the good work.
Alysia Of The Pen 7/17/07 . chapter 1
? :) I like it, and it makes sense. Faved
Concrete 7/28/06 . chapter 1
DAYDREAM! I like it. It's really short, but, still.
Lady.Meister 7/24/06 . chapter 1
Okay.

"If" awesomeness written by you.

Hiatus for "One More Time" Bad. VERY bad.
kmanselm 7/17/06 . chapter 1
wow, is all i can say. that last scene from the movie realy touched me too, and your writing touched me as well. I can almost see katatara and aang reading this.
Val-Creative 7/17/06 . chapter 1
So very sad. It took me a minute but I finally matched who's voice was who's and I have to say, they were appropriate. The final statement, both of their voices combined, was the perfect ending to what you wrote. I know a lot of people are writing about the movie but this is the better of what I've seen so far. Fantastic.

Val
Liselle129 7/17/06 . chapter 1
I liked this. I, too, found that scene very moving and wondered what they were both thinking. It even inspired me to write my own sort of epilogue to the movie, Aftermath, which I have just posted. Since you seem to like my writing, I thought you might like to know.

There has been a lot of crying on the show lately. I guess that's a sign that there are some painful character turns being taken.
Schwanengesang 7/16/06 . chapter 1
This is really good! I love the repition.]
JillRG 7/16/06 . chapter 1
I enjoyed the experience of reading it, too- A LOT.
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