That was sad, but good story. Great job.

GEEZ! I almost cryed! Reading this while listening to the sound track to Memoirs of a Geisha makes a good combination, but the saddness of the music and the the story just does a number on ya'! Geez just typing this make me want to cry cause I keep thinking about it...

You are a very good writer to get to this state...

hard to swallow...

Brilliant again CeeKay.
But you're right, it's incrediably sad. Are you planning on writing another fic expanding on this one because it just feels there are so many unsaid things? I love a more indepth look at events from this fic.
Bella (from GW)

I almost cried myself. You've got to give poor John a brief in your next installment...PLEASE.

All in all great job.

Wow! Powerful and deeply moving.

That was really intense and heart-wrenching. I thought you dealt with it sensitively, as it is a depressing subject matter. Your Teyla was so in-character, I felt like I was watching it on the screen. Wonderful job. Are you adding more?

CK... beautiful... holy smokes that was beautiful... emotional and sad... and all those things you do lots of. Wonderful work.

Oh, so sad...

That was incredibly sad! Poor Sheppard. Sniff, sniff...

man that was intense ceekay! very well written though...i thought you captured the grief very well...though i hope that never has to happen!!