2 freaking years you haven't updated man come on

ok this sucks...again
sorry for flaming so many times but it is true

ok this sucks
speak of the devil
kera my ** hmph

oh god why naruto why?
this is driving me crazy!
NARUTO WOULD NEVER TURN EVIL!
NEVER!
EVEN THOUGH THIS IS A FANFICTION STORY!!

(is crying)why u make naruto so? so so so...evilish? i am so crying rite now. at least he with hinata. naruhina 4evr!

I think you should make it so hinata tells naruto that she loves him and becomes not evil and revels himself to everybody.

I´m sad very sad!
You haven´t updated in decades...
Hope you´re still alive somewhere and remeber that you have an unfinished story/stories. :)

Regarding the story...
Everything now gets super exciting!
Hinata now is jealous of poor TenTen
and Naruto is in the middle of this mess!
I´m just thinking of the many possibilities.

*sighs* I hope you come back!

great story, i especially love the new naruto though when is he going to start to actually try and harm Konoha and i find it hard to believe he's going to do it by himself...anyway UPDATE SOON!

Its amazing that when Naruto kissed Hinata Neji didn't do anything XD

Awesome fics. Neednt say more.

But why havent you continued for years now?

Hope you are not dead. If you have continued on other sites, then please link it in your profile.

Mfg

This story is wonderfully well written. The thing that I really like about this story is how it's written in Naruto's point of view. It allows the reader to understand what goes on in Naruto's mind, and even though his thoughts aggravate me, it's nice to know how he feels. Anyways I hope you update soon and keep up the good work.

Great fic. Update soon please

This story is good.However I have stopped reading after the second chapter for a few reasons.Mostly because Naruto is so Bi-polar that his mood keeps going between dramatic lust and the urge to psychotically kill which makes it hard to define his character even from the first person perspective. The other reasons are non-important and revolve solely around my own reading and story preferences.Now that I have cleared away the bad lets look at the good.Your writing style is superb and well crafted.It was a pleasure to read something that didn't seem like fan-girl dribble.The first person view is a rarity on this sight and even less commonly done well.I also liked the fact that the characters that have the possibility of romance (I.E. Naruto and Hinata) don't talk awkwardly for five minutes before making out in the nearest closet as do far too many other stories.The fight was good and easy to imagine.A good story just the character you made Naruto out to be ** me off on a personal level.I sincerly hope you keep writing in the future.

oi, what are you thinking, making me read a story WITH a cliff hanger right before I NEED to go to sleep. Your evil...Too evil...ah well gambatte kurosai^^

hmm