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| Blade 2007-09-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am stunned. I have been wondering what the effect of the Labyrinth being told to everyone by Sarah would do, and came to the genetal cocnlusion that the Labyrinth would grow, but I did not have the twist that it would be inside Sarah. Well, great minds think alike, and though the only part I can critique is how you ended this story, the rest of it is awesome. Write a sequel, please? You don't have to, it is fine the way it is, but how would you have her friends react to her talking about them constantly, instead of to them? |
| Crystal Shores 2007-03-27 ch 1,  | abuseI want to reveiw...but it is too beautiful for words. I would only ruin its spell... |
| darkforces 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abusei like it, but the endings slightly week, just the wording, you may want to have a look, i love the story though |
| Water Block 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was so good! I loved this-very poetic~ |
| Whatsername81 2006-07-22 ch 1, | abuseAww! Good stuff. Keep up the good writing! |
| Kitty Rasputin 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseVery unusual and original. I liked it so much that I put it on my favorite stories list. Keep it up. |
| Myra of the Flame 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuse-claps- |
| Anij 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseoh! yay! *sniff* That's so bittersweet and beautiful. She finally went away with him. She gets to be with her King and her brother. :-D |
| White Rose Withering 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseAh that was nice, pretty even. I can imagine the look on his face when she said the words. And BTW I really love your Disclaimer, it's a shame none of us will. |