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pi-or-pie
2009-10-26 . chapter 4
Lol! Royette!
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
2009-07-27 . chapter 7
hehehe...nice job! it really lived up to its genre...humor and romance...though i would've wanted more with the romance inclining to the edxwin pairing...but it was good...all good...i enjoyed reading everything...^^
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
2009-07-27 . chapter 6
winry is EVIL!

EVIL I TELL YOU!

bwhahahahahahaha!
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
2009-07-27 . chapter 5
*eyes go wide*

omg! i can't believe that all of that was happening! and what's even more unbelievable? roy kissing riza, while he's still dressed up like a girl!

hahaha! a crazy case of yuri! hehehe^^
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
2009-07-27 . chapter 4
*can't get over with royette*

hahahaha!^^
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
2009-07-27 . chapter 3
ooh...what kind of project? i wonder...hehehe...

i just love roy's reaction...and it seemed that he really took his time to let it all sink in...and i had to laugh all throughout that time...^^
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
2009-07-27 . chapter 2
*still can't stop laughing!*

i don't know which of the two i should feel sorry for...

ed or roy...

ahahahahaha!

and edwina? hahaha...now that's a "creative" name...hehehe^^
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
*roflmao*

can't...

*haha*

stop...

*haha*

crying...

*haha*

because...

*haha*

i'm laughing so hard!

*hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!*

you were probably wondering with the crying part...hehehe...i just added that thing randomly...^^
Kartika-The-Hedgehog
2009-06-11 . chapter 7
GO AL! Awsm story I loved the last chapter and also the Royai chapter.
racooncity
2009-05-22 . chapter 7
wahahahaha okay stop laughing now. this is DAMN FUNNY!!

back to review. as i said thousand times, yes, the grammar's nice. i'm reading this while listening to Ready Steady Go and that makes me laugh even harder. Don't know how. Hmm... Wow, do you like EdxRoy?! Oh well. them kissing making the story more 'realistic' in a way, and more a laughing material. great story, great 'moral', and great fun! hey, but how's about Ed's legs? his legs are boys', right? I'm just thinking how HE become a SHE. you're making it a whole lot easier.

i'm so going to recommend this to my friends, if you let me to. Can i? thx!
racooncity
2009-05-22 . chapter 5
yes, like ed, i'm laughing my head off at the moment. I'll get you the review in the last chapt.
'Lemonaade.
2008-11-03 . chapter 7
wow, so good! *-*

i loved the idea. I can't imagine Roy with a wig or i will start laughing. xD

why don't you create a sequence? :3
i would read it, for sure! ;D
Aran'sApprentice-Meahow
2008-09-28 . chapter 7
Heheh. This ending is sort of a letdown...since they didn't get together... *cry* but it's stil pretty hilarious. Pleather? i don't know what exactly that means, it just SOUNDS funny. lolz. Your writing style is definitely improving--i didn't notice it being spazztastic at any point. Nice.

...oh, and WHOA!! ANOTHER FINISHED STORY!! WHOT!! WE NEED TO THROW A PARTAY!! lolz. now how about any of those other ones?
:P

~Meahow
Andrew Borealis
2008-09-26 . chapter 7
THIS IS HILARIOUS! I can't wait to see more!
CreativebutLazy
2008-09-19 . chapter 7
awe that was an awesome story, and I thought the ending was satisfying(of course then again I wasn't one of the ones waiting for so long for you to update) still I loved it there defiantly needs to be more crossdressing!Ed fics.
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