y don't u rite a chp. story it would be better.

i love this story you should continue it 'cause your story is in my top 20 as number 11 you might be able to go to 5 if you keep on writing

hey i like this story please contine

IMHO this can't stay a oneshot...really it is angsty but too much sad for me to bear so if I can read anything more, as sad as this if you want but that 'll hekp me to sooth my soul.

wow nice!

Oh wow... That was really some angst. (Lucky Kagome got to kiss Sesshoumaru. :P) But that's good. I like angst. And romantic angst (or however the hell you say it...Angsty romance? O.o) is even better! Haha...

I have to agree, a chapter-story would allow for more depth, but it's fine as it is. :) I saw the ONE-SHOT thing, and thought "Maybe they have the same problem I do...?" because people always review and say "Shouldn't this be continued?" and I get ticked off and am like "NO! DIIE!" or something. Ah hah hah...

Oh blah. I rambled again. O.o I'm sorry. XD

I liked Kagome's thought on the situation. "You’re married to the kindest, finest man in the world and you do not like his older, arrogant, rude, sexy older brother at all." It made me laugh.

Anyhow, I'm going to shut up before I seem way more insane than I am. O_o

aw... it's really sad, poor kagz... and damn you sesshoumaru!! not really, I can never stay mad at him.. but really that was SAD!! lol I said that already...

I need a sequal to this story if U dont mind

nice story. poor Kagome she has to suffer now.

omg!this is so awesome! and so much detail and imagery in just a oneshot! cool. loved it.

Hmm...did you get this from a movie called "Perlude to a Kiss" or something like that? All the while...it was awesome.

it is vey short...but funny...so typical of inu to not listen to vain attempts at explaining...i can even imagine fluffy doing that then not even blinking an eye...however you should at least do another chapter in his pov...but watev...it isn't very angsty (no offense)just...maybe achapter in inu's pov would help make it more angsty..

please continue it!
omg suspence man...
yoyo

YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE! I know it was one-shot but PLEASE! almost all of us that have read this want you to continue. SO YOU BETTER PLEASE!

Oh my god! gome is with inuyasha and she kissed sess I hope this isn't all of it I hope I get to read more. I like sess better then inuyasha so i think it's would be cool if sess took her from him. love it hope there's more to come.