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Reviews for: Family Dysfunction
cklammer
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
Urmh, what is that? A crossover in spirit with "Desperate Housewives"? (Confusion)
Mariel3
2006-08-17 . chapter 1
I don't know how I missed this. I loved it, though, so apologies for the late review...

Very nicely done. I loved how you started right in a scene. And totally excellent feelings on Adama's part as to their allowing the settlement on New Caprica. Adama's slip up when Lee spoke about 'being on with her' when the attack happened was perfectly timed. Very enjoyable vignette. Now I have to see if you've posted something that shows what comes next. (leaves hopefully...)
ozma914
2006-07-23 . chapter 1
the producers are making a mistake if they don't lift this scene right out of fanfiction and insert it into the first episode of the next season. And pay you, of course.
ammonite
2006-07-17 . chapter 1
When I saw who the author was,I knew this was going to be good, and I wasn't disappointed. You are so clever - and I mean that in ever possible good way.
-yannik-
2006-07-17 . chapter 1
Lovely :)

At the beginning I thought Adama was thinking "her" about Kara... Was this your purpose?
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