A great story. Very good.

Shows a great deal of promise... I've got about a dozen buffy fics planned and unwritten... all because I've always got something else in the works! Ok that said this chapter is excellently written and would serve well as the openning to a longer fic. you've got the atmosphere down perfect, and grabbed the reader with some really good hooks, among them the slimy horned demon things, and not to mention that they interrupted something already in progress. my last question: what the hell could make two slayers run like bats out of hell.

This one deserves to be turned in to a multi-chapter/full episode.

Cabin fever already Faith? tch, that girl...(got to love her ;D)

Buffy better either find a way out or something to occupy Faith, otherwise they could end up in even more trouble...

Good first chapter, well-written and nicely atmospheric.

Looking forward to the next update.

This is really good, you have the character's on track. Please continue!

good work

I like it. Very well written. Please continue! (:

I like it. Very well written and you have the characters down stat. I hope to read more. Also do you think you can read and review one of mine? I love this. Also, does this take place in third season or after the seventh?