I really really really really love this...just thought you should know. :D I think another chapter would be to much...it's so perfect the way it is!

One question about the very end:

DOES Gunsmoke have IHOPS? do they still exist? :D:D:D

I love the incredible detail you put into it, and the way you treated each single aspect of the morning! I envy your patience - how long did it take you to write it!? Please continue it, you've captured Vash very well, and the introspective musings are absolutely delicious!

Wow, this was really good! I found it in another writers faves, and I recognized your name... don't know if you remember me for deviantART? Anyway, LOVE this, it really captures Vash's personality brilliantly! Kudos!

:) Jayrynn

It would be awesome if you made other chapters of the other characters routines in the morning! =)

Please!? *smile*

I saw this one on tokyopop (I'm dremer there). Excellent work!

I can tell you put a lot of love into this fic. I think you did a great job writing from Vash's perspective! I would definitely enjoy a few more chapters.

P.S. There really are IHOPs everywhere, aren't there? Wonder if they have a Denny's on Gunsmoke.

Wow that's really Vash alright! it sounds just like him!

*jumps up and hugs you* This is awesome! You have a knack at getting into Vash's head. Excellent work! You wrote this so well I felt like he was actually talking. His thoughts are so sad! Poor Vash, I just wanna huggle him. For some reason, I absolutely love when you have him wake from the dream and look at the date, and how he thinks that over 100 April 8ths have passed in his life. It really reminds a reader how old he is!

I love the use of present tense. It's such a fun way to write! It gives this story a very nice personal feel, and a sense of immediacy. I like how you included both anime and manga scenes, and gave more insight into Vash's daily schedule. This is very awesome! And you had Kuroneko in it, too! Keep up the good work.

—Alaena

OH MY HECK! I loved this story! What a clever idea... I would have never thought of it. I know you put A LOT of hard work into it- I can tell. I understand it would be hard to write everything in present tense, but it flows so well that way- like I'm really inside the Humanoid Typhoon's head. I loved how you fit little humorous lines in, which helped catch all of Vash's capricious emotion. He is capricious, and the format of the story shows it. Please please write more chapters, I would love to read them! You did a great job with detail and capturing Vash's mind wanderings as he gets ready for the day (my mind always wanders when I get ready) The tittle was perfect to. Thank for an amazing read!

I am VERY impressed! You are a very talented writer, and we need more of those on here!

I liked the way you portrayed Vash. I think it's veru accurate and deep.

Meesa liked very much.

~Love Always from Cleone (formerly Ortuna)

So I see you finally put this up...

Yay!

this is pretty in character. i don't know if you read the manga... if you do, vash's morning routine is pretty thoroughly laid out in trigun maximum volume 1 i THINK (might be vol 2. it's right before the fight with the fries and the polos)... he does one-armed pushups, although he's standing on the one arm while he's doing them, and when he's finished he nearly pukes. it doesn't look like such an easy routine :) considering it's the most improbable way to do pushups ever, i feel it should get more recognition! just kidding. this was an interesting fic.

Hey there! You're very much improving at writing, and that's a good thing. ^_^ This is a very interesting fic, though you do have a couple of little problems here and there (mostly of the typo nature, and the mention of IHOP is more than a little jarring because I'd bet they don't exist in the canon universe, and a few stylistic and pacing issues), but mostly, you have Vash IC for the most part and you've written an interesting slice of life story. Congratulations on it ^_^