Utterly and completely amazing. _ You caught Valgaav/Valtierra's character more than almost any other person could! It's wonderful! The parts over Tionney brought me to tears! Your writing style (especially first-person, which I tend not to be a fan of, despite this story bringing out almost every possible emotion from me) is admirable! XD Keep it up!

That was a preety good story. I wouldn't minde reading somthing else from you

This fanfiction is very well written. The characterization of Valgaav is great, and the story is very interesting with some nice interactions between the characters. Reading this was a delight.

Wow.. that was really good... really sad.

::claps:: One of the best Val-kun fics I've read. I love the way you write and your personification of Val is wonderful. Keep up the good work!