Nice job, I loved it!

oh gosh... it was brilliant. short... but awesome, and youve got my head whirling with ideas now... thanks for a great read.

this was very sweet i liked it good job

i love this!
:)

i always thought that sirius was like that and i always loved how much he loved harry even tho he only knownhim 4 2 years

that was cute

that was beautiful
wonderfully written

It made me cry! lol
I really enjoyed reading this!
Love,
MG

'Fighting the urge to cry' when she read this story...thats so sad! The 'Don't worry kid' was especially sad...keep it up!

OMG. That was so sad and emotional. It was soo sweet. I think you should definetely continue this for longer than a one-shot, and that's the first time I've ever said that in the whole year that I've been reading fanfics. I want to know more- what happens!

This was adorable I really loved it. It's a shame knowing that will never happen. *sob*

This is just sad, knowing what happens to that loyal black dog all too soon. *sigh* :(

I love this piece. It's so emotional even though it isn't very long. I like how you touched on the Sirius father-figure issue...most people forget about that.

I am just plain sad. I read the summary of this fic and I practically burst into tears. Reading your story further didn't help this cause either, lol

You have laced so much emotion into this without making it out of character. It's simply brilliant.

Great job,
~SkyQuill

aw! thats so adorable! tear!