Very good man. I enjoyed the way at one point you switched point of views. Every thing was well desgribed. I laughed when Peppy nearly blew fox's ear off. that was funny... I had a feeling that jackson dude was shady... but the new crew... Great chapter dude. I look forward to the next and again, good luck with ya studies.

Dan F

WOW...I mean really, I haven't really seen meny T rated star fox fictions that are so spectacular as this one, and really coming from me who reads tons of storys thats really something.

It's unfortunate that this is being updated so slowly, but I understand the time constraints you deal with at school. However, I really hope you don't let this project die, as you have me hooked at the very least. Excellent going, and I remain glued to see how this pans out!

This is pretty awesome! I can't wait!

OMG WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER UPDATING~!

Best wishes,
KrzyKrn

Very, very nice. You better be planning on updating this soon. :P

Very nice, d-man! I'm likin' what I'm seein...keep up the good work, man.
Peace!
VITN

What the... I'm completely confused with the whole thing that happened with Rob. What happened to him? And some how I understood the entire conversation that occured between Dr. Seth and Slippy. >_>

Hehe, love the contrast between the change of clothes ;p

Um, right. Everything's baffled me, from Dr Seth's explanation to whatever ROB felt like doing. I'll read it through a second time to make sure :)

But whatever the case, I look forward to your next chapter :)

I love Falco. "Slip ain't here right now, could you explain that again in English?" - that was the best line ;p

Lies, lies, lies. I love the drama of it all!

Yeah, I didn't really trust Lee either. I loved the cliffhanger at the end :)

A great chapter :)

I don't actually like Slippy too much, but I do like your characterisation of him. Now the plot's gotten more interesting and critical :)

Andross Biotech - probably not going to please Fox too much, but he'd probably say yes anyway.

A good chapter, as always :)

This is turning very serious - I like it! I loved how you keep Fox's thoughts running how he couldn't say her whereas Slippy's gushing on about how the exploding wall.

Overall, a good chapter :)

Wow, another intense chapter! Your style doesn't fail to impress me, and that's only the second chapter! I loved the technical terms you put in there and the graphic details.

Again, check through the question mark/exclamation mark bits.

I'll go and review the next chapter now :)

Hey, this is a good start. I'm impressed. I loved the whole drama of it and sets the mood perfectly.

Just a minor mistake: "You think you could hurry her up a bit?" Asked Falco. Should be "You think you could hurry her up a bit?" asked Falco. Question marks and exclamation marks serve as a comma if used at the end of speech.

Other than that, keep up the good work. And yes, I'll review every chapter - that's my style ;p

Ok ...so it's crunch time. I hope it goes well for her. An excellent chapter. I didn't find anything wrong with it. honestly. I enjoyed it where SLippy translated the technical mumbo-jumbo. It helped me too. *grins* I'm interested as to what twist is happening. I look forward to the next chapter. Glad to know school is going well for ya mate. Take your time with the story and good luck with your studies.

Dan F