love this i thought it was perfect

So good, so sad. Really beautiful. Gonna go cry now.

My oh my. I love how you described the feelings in Evan's eyes. That just...wow.

oh man...I can't tell you how much I wish this wasn't a one-shot. lol. But its great, none the less.

Ana

This is a descriptive story, explaining what happened to Kayleigh after the final flashback of the movie.

The way you described her feelings when she looked into the eyes of someone who could only trigger a shadow of a memory was excellent.

very cool... i like this piece. it's very intreaging the way you let it just flow like you did. nice job.

-Anie

Great story

I love this. I've always wanted to know what She was thinking when they pass at the end of the movie. Please write more...I know it might be a stretch...but this is a great start!

ive seen this movie a billion times. boy do i love it. since i've seen the movie, i know the exact scene. you captured it perfectly. kudos!

wow. i just watched the movie for the first time today, and i must say, your little story captures that last scene perfectly. there's a lot of emotion packed into this one little story. excellent work.