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Reviews For: Passing Strangers

Anaharath
2007-06-04
ch 1,
abuseoh man...I can't tell you how much I wish this wasn't a one-shot. lol. But its great, none the less.

~Ana
Michael2
2007-01-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is a descriptive story, explaining what happened to Kayleigh after the final flashback of the movie.

The way you described her feelings when she looked into the eyes of someone who could only trigger a shadow of a memory was excellent.
Invisible Shadowess
2006-11-20
ch 1,
abusevery cool... i like this piece. it's very intreaging the way you let it just flow like you did. nice job.

-Anie
Mayo Detinwolf
2006-10-18
ch 1,
abuseGreat story
Charlie Snipe
2006-07-31
ch 1,
abuseI love this. I've always wanted to know what She was thinking when they pass at the end of the movie. Please write more...I know it might be a stretch...but this is a great start!
-blue-oyster-cult-love-
2006-07-25
ch 1,
abuseive seen this movie a billion times. boy do i love it. since i've seen the movie, i know the exact scene. you captured it perfectly. kudos!
marinawings
2006-07-21
ch 1,
abusewow. i just watched the movie for the first time today, and i must say, your little story captures that last scene perfectly. there's a lot of emotion packed into this one little story. excellent work.
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