 Anaharath 2007-06-04 . chapter 1oh man...I can't tell you how much I wish this wasn't a one-shot. lol. But its great, none the less.
~Ana |
 Michael2 2007-01-22 . chapter 1This is a descriptive story, explaining what happened to Kayleigh after the final flashback of the movie.
The way you described her feelings when she looked into the eyes of someone who could only trigger a shadow of a memory was excellent. |
 Invisible Shadowess 2006-11-20 . chapter 1very cool... i like this piece. it's very intreaging the way you let it just flow like you did. nice job.
-Anie |
 Mayo Detinwolf 2006-10-18 . chapter 1Great story |
 Charlie Snipe 2006-07-31 . chapter 1I love this. I've always wanted to know what She was thinking when they pass at the end of the movie. Please write more...I know it might be a stretch...but this is a great start! |
 -blue-oyster-cult-love- 2006-07-25 . chapter 1ive seen this movie a billion times. boy do i love it. since i've seen the movie, i know the exact scene. you captured it perfectly. kudos! |
 marinawings 2006-07-21 . chapter 1wow. i just watched the movie for the first time today, and i must say, your little story captures that last scene perfectly. there's a lot of emotion packed into this one little story. excellent work. |