Hey i love what you did with Illanie. and i am so looking forward to the next chapters

Wow, Illanie's so COOL!! I wish I had the chance to take a stab at Blondie, but I'll let the characters deal with her. Much more entertaining that way. And I hope Mei will get back at Brownie for snapping her wrist(can't wait to see what she has in store for the evil Barbie-dolls).

I'll also give you the eye patch description through PM.

PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!

Ooh! So you need a character? Hey, do people who want to submit a character put it in a review or IM it to you?

I hope you write a chapter soon, my life's becoming boring again!

Well...
number 1: good chapter

Two:
some on should pop out of the cake..or the cake should lead to some godforsaken planet of bunny nija's!
or some radioactive goo ends up some muffins that attemp to take over the world!
Hmm...or by standing in front of a mirror her oppisate steps out or her evil twin.
just throwing ideas out there.

Three: update soon

Well now we se that Blondie and Brownie are starting to get under everyone's skin, except for poor(yeah right, like I feel sorry for them) Raph and Don. They got them wrapped around their witch-like claws.

Now here's my suggestion on an idea. Give the two airheads what they deserve! Get a big fight scene with Nori and Mei and maybe a friend of Mei's (or something). Then have Raph and Don kick them to the curb! Yeah!

This was a great chapter, by the way. Nice touch with adding the tension. Well, keep updating because I'll be waiting!

Only got three things to say.
1. Still love it
2. really wasn't expencting that to happen
3. update really fast cause that cliffy was really cruel

well I read..heres my review. Another good chapter, alot hapier then the last two chapters! Good job! please update

she died! Nori well the little girl died! What the heck? She's definatly had a lot to deal with, but didn't see that one coming. Confusing at parts, but otherwise enjoyable. Keep updating!

YES! BEAT THE TWO GIRLS INTO THE GROUND, NORI AND MEI! *laughs maniacly* I have one question, though. was it a positive or a negative thing that Blondie and Brownie did, telling everything? I might have read past the answer, but oh well.


And Mei's getting married... wow...

UPDATE!! WE MUST SEE THE WEDDING RESULTS!!

Still love it and am waiting for the next chapter

NO! YOU KILLED NINA! *runs off sobbing* Why did you kill her? She was too sweet to die! Why must the good little children die young? But I liked Nori, she seems cool.

As much as plot though, it's confusing a bit. You need to add more detail on what's happening and/or how it's happened. That way it won't seem too much like you're jumping from one topic to the next (of course, this sometimes isn't a bad thing).

Well, I've given my review. I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON BECAUSE I'LL STILL BE WAITING FOR MORE CHAPTERS!

Are you gonna update soon? I really wanna know what happens next!

wow you updated. what a sad depressing chapter, she adopts a kid, her sister dies, and the turtle leave her. Wow. Wow. Update.

your good

Oh my gosh! SO SAD!! (cries) I love Nina and hate whoever kidnapped her. Why did the Turtles leave Mei? I mean, she didn't do anything to make them leave! (If the explination's in another chapter, please tell me which one so I can reread it) And they weren't there to comfort her when she was going through the hard times! GR! Still, I can't wait to see her kick butt to get Nina back! YAY MEI!!

Update as soon as possible!