oh super cool! update this too! PLEASE!

this is a lot of fun reading. hope you update soon

i like it,it should have longer chapters but otherwise PERFECTO

That was a good beginning

Oh that Vala! She is so sneaky. I love it! Great story. Please keep writting, it is so entertaining!

Love it!

Don't Vala and Daniel ever get along? Wouldn't she have just a wee crush on little Danny? Bug him to get him to pay attention to her? Wouldn't little Danny boy be secretly facinated by Vala?

they won't get sleepy i bet!

Okay...that was really short.

Short but cute chap. Loving it so far. lol, poor Daniel, didn't get his own food. lol. Please update soon!
Padmé out.

I like the chapter, but why are your chapter getting shorter and shorter with each chapter? Why not combine chapters to make one big chapter. And please don't take this personally, because it is a great story... just trying to help you out. Please update soon!

Okay , I'm finding this story pretty interesting, but right now there's not much going on and the chapters are REALLY short. For example, the past 5 could be combined into one.

great story but why so short?

Great short chapter! I wonder how long it will take for Daniel and Vala to make up.

Short, but cute. Is Daniel going to be trying to get back at Vala now. Patiently waiting for more.