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| Arcaina 2007-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI do agree; Sakura's love isn't blind. She loves Sasuke for who and what he is. She loves Sasuke, not UCHIHA Sasuke. She loves Sasuke's person, flaws, etc. I know how she feels in this. I have some guy friends of mine that are in love with me as well, and it pains me that I can't do anything for them. Love isn't something that's forced or pitied. That's why I adore SasuSaku because of it's natural chemistry and harmony. And I don't need anything too big for their "happily ever-after." Just a small, subtle, romantic moment between the two that shows they do care and love eachother. Maybe, Sasuke holding her hand or doing some extra training with her or becoming a better person because of her, and a kiss wouldn't hurt, though. ;D I do love this little oneshot. It makes you think and it touches you. That's what great writing is all about, in my honest opinion. I enjoy reading your SasuSaku stories. Write more!! :D |
| heartless ghost 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant. Good job! |
| HeartbrokenbyaHeartbreaker 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseSo true =) Tell it like it is. And I really felt this piece describes how she feels. Well done! -Sora "Shannaro" |
| MM-Kokopelli 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuse... wow, brilliant and very introspectrive. I clap for you. ...you do know what Sasuke's new outfit looks like, right? How it's all gay and was probably designed for Orochimaru's pedophilic wishes... (shudder) Ah well. It's still brilliant. Huzzah. |
| Sienna Maiu 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abuseYes, exactly. *smile* |
| Kasumi-333 2006-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is good, I love you Risa/Satoshi works by the way. We need more. Keep writing. P.S: You said requests inspire you, so I request you to write Naruto/Sakura fic, that takes place many years later and it must have a kiss in it. |
| Mere Anarchy 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseOh, jeez. So, you're going along great, writing your fics and getting reviews that make you all happy inside, and then you come across something like this that makes you feel completely insignificant, as far as writing talent goes. Ugh. I need chocolate. Anyway, what I'm TRYING to say is that this is an excellent piece: it portrayed Sakura's emotions and thoughts perfectly. And, yes, I agree with you about how Sakura isn't blind to Sasuke's faults. That's the beauty of the whole relationship. Wow, I feel like writing another SasuSaku. Heh. Now all I need is a PLOT. ;) Keep writing, you're marvelous! -Mere Anarchy |
| Diaph Annie 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseYou are honestly the best writer EVER. I love your style, it's so different from everyone else's. And you always seem to get their feelings exactly right. Your style s... it's hard to explain. But it just feels so RAW, if you know what I mean? And I love it. I wish I could do that. (And maybe Naruto was the same to her, wasn’t he? But he had too many other dreams for her to handle. And besides, she couldn’t—wouldn’t—ever hurt the boy who sacrificed his more than what was needed for her dream, her little selfish dream—which may have become his dream as well.) Naruto loved her that much, and sometimes Sakura wonders why she never felt the same. Brilliant. Words can't describe how much I loved that, honestly. And now I'm off to wallow in my own jealousy =). |
| TaurenLeaf 2006-08-06 ch 1, | abuseO.O uwah... i love the ending! really really really nicely written...just still too many parentheses (SP?!?!) but i guess that's your style. well anyways good job! |
| Sakura Rocks 2006-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story/piece. I loved it, as it struck me as the exact type of things that could really be going on in Saku's head. Keep up the great job, and once again, I love it! |
| pnaixrose 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseGoodness...I feel so bad for Sakura now, even more than before. haha. I like the end of this. "That's love. Exactly." Jeez love is so complicated. =] |
| kanan com 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseHmm...now this one was also good. I can just imagine Sakura thinking those things. I can even imagine her saying to Naruto at one point (like a flashback or something) "You're my best friend, and I love you...SO MUCH.." with tears welled up in her eyes. That would make a good picture...hmm... Anyway, once again, Bravo. Kanan com. |
| ElasticBobaTurtle 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseOh, the emotional conflict! This is a beautiful introspective piece. You really get to the feelings and thoughts of the character, and your style is totally recognizable (in a good way). ;) Write more~ |
| Aperira 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseYOU BETCHA SASUKE! COME BACK ALREADY! AND WEAR SOME NEW CLOTHES TOO! oh yeah, your story is awesome! ^_^ |
| kerrance. 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abusethat was really good. and i agree with you about the whole "blindly in love" thing. i spend most of my life trying to convince my sister of the same thing. |