i bet rita was in the bushes!
ahh, i can see the newspapers now,
"CHOSEN ONE TALKS TO DEATH"
"THE-BOY-HOW-LIVED-TO-BECOME-THE-MAN-THAT-HAS-TO-DEFEAT-YOU-KNOW-WHO-ALSO-LIVED-TO-TALK-TO-DEATH"
i really liked it.i would have loved to see ron and hermione's
reactions though.
"hey guys? you know, i pretty sure the DH exist."
"really? why's that?"
"well, Hermione i was walking along, and then i met death.
"WHAT?!"
~priceless~
r o c k - o n,
~w e n

As i have read your profile just before reading this story i was thinking of another Death (one a little more black and with a white horse :-) ).
That said it was quite nice and as i had forgot the summaries at the beginning i made the wildest hypothesis on his identity.
Ciao!

"It could have been said that the young man had a theme going"

*dies*

That came outof nowhere. The coolness of Death, his refusal to laugh - the adjectives you use "Prolonged, cool stare" - he is chilling. And Harry's reactions are - wow. Sometimes something is so good you're speechless. This is one of those times. I love the bacon sandwiches - such a sharp and mundane contrast to what has just passed.

DAMN!! This was one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Which is saying a lot because I read fanfics all the time. Your use of description is incredible. I could clearly picture the scene in my head. I loved your death too. I could see death as being exactly like your portrayal of him. The grass was very interesting, it makes you wonder what it is but I like that you didn't tell us...that you left a little mystery for us. Overall I have to say this was an amazing and very intriguing story!! Keep up the great work!

Wow, that's one of those, "Damn, I could see it happening in the books" fics. I liked, it showed Death quite well. :)

A very interesting puzzle piece. But it leaves me wanting more. I want to know if either of them learned anything from the other - saw any bit of the other side of it. For surely "Death" had some reason for becoming visible to a mortal and this particular mortal?

oh, intriguing... and quite heart-wrenching too, with the mentions of all Harry's lost loved ones. This could continue- and you have my fll support if it does! Beautiful written, my congratulations.
R x

Interesting.

Hey this is really good! I like it!