| Reviews for Deviations |
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ChikaMegumi 7/4/10 . chapter 1Awwe, that made me smile. I haven't interacted with that fandom in such a long time, it really brought back memories. I like the feel of this writing, it's fanfiction, of course it may be out of character, but it was believable, and I think that counts as enough to make your readers happy. I love little introspectives like this, if you would call it one. It's often difficult to analyze and be able to write in a way that makes it story-esque and I give you lots of credit as a writer for making it work wonderfully. (: Keep writing! |
Thunder Ring 8/26/06 . chapter 8That was sweet! I really like that it! Update as soon as you can please |
ianii 8/22/06 . chapter 8Aw. x) Silly boy. |
Svecounia 8/21/06 . chapter 8Aw... Cute... _ Have fun at college! . |
smiling cat 8/21/06 . chapter 8CUTE! |
smiling cat 8/20/06 . chapter 7;_; sniff, so cute. Hiei is not as OOC as you think |
RitSuYue 8/8/06 . chapter 7That was a nice drabble, I really liked it. Please write more soon. |
Lachen 8/7/06 . chapter 6well I wish all of these were a little longer...:S |
BuBBLe Tea BaBe 7/30/06 . chapter 5so sad more please D |
smiling cat 7/28/06 . chapter 5Hiei, you jerk! Messing it all up just for the sake of your pride! -Rant mode off- Good drabble! You always manage to keep them in character. But I hope the next one will be happier. |
Cymrian Valdemar 7/27/06 . chapter 4Ooh, this one was good. Not to mention that you made the 100-word cutoff, which is such a _pain._ I really liked how you give Botan character. She's not OoC at all in my opinion (then again, _my_ Botan may very well be OoC and I'm just deluding myself, so I'm hardly objective). I happen to like the thought of Botan being something other than a cheerleader with an oar and a bat instead of pom-poms, but that's me, not Togashi. _ Anyway, I really like how she's comparing herself to others. I hadn't really thought about her doing that, and now I'm hitting myself for not nabbing this idea earlier. 9.9 I must be overlooking the other girls...oops. X_X So yeah, loved the fic. More please? _ And sorry 'bout the rambling review... |
smiling cat 7/22/06 . chapter 3Poor Hiei! _ He really doesn't get it. So funny! Good job |
ianii 7/18/06 . chapter 2This chapter was hilarious. Poking fun at Hiei is the best. |
Uten Naraba 7/18/06 . chapter 1I really like it. Short and sweet. |
RitSuYue 7/18/06 . chapter 1I don't think Hiei was OOC. Botan either. You did a really good job. Please update soon. |