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zexionXsecretXadmirer
2007-06-29 . chapter 6
ok well i just read the thing for the ghost stories and i would like to be in one.

rebecca or Misaki (perferrably rebecca)
female
ghost
T3hTarotJoker
2007-04-28 . chapter 8
Me: XD I HAVE A GHOST STORY ^.^
Nezumi: ...
Me: k, so there was a girl named karishma who REALLY liked ballet, but she didnt hav any ballet shoes. so she and her mom went shopping, and they found these really pretty blood red shoes, and 4 sum reason they were really cheap. when they asked y, the shopkeeper just said its because he had those shoes 4 a really long time and wanted 2 get rid of them already. so karishma bought the shoes and she showed them off 2 her ballet class. there was 1 girl in her class tho named emerald who wanted the ballet shoes so she stole them. the next day emerald didnt show up @ ballet class and was found dead in her bedroom. she was on the floor and she was wearing the shoes. when emrealds parents found the shoes, they looked 4 the owners cuz they didnt want them. so, the shoes got back 2 karishma. the next morning karishma put the shoes on and saw a boy dressed entirely in red standing in front of her. they ended up dancing, but karishma paused 4 a sec cuz she wanted 2 write down what was happenin. she got sum of it down, but other than this, all we know is she was found dead, w/ blood splattered all over the paper, but no wound.
... and yeah, thats the end of that ghost story.
... its the only 2 i kno.
Chloe Maria LiClaire
2007-03-01 . chapter 8
I wanna be haunted... PLEASE!
HyperFriend13
2006-12-03 . chapter 8
Hehe... I can't wait till the next chappy's up. I must admit, that as nice as the stories were, they scared me. Especially the one with the rotting corpse in the bedroom and the poor girl who got licked by what she thought was her dog. Poor doggie. Didn't deserve to die. *sniff* Her fault for telling strangers everything about herself. *sob* poor doggie!

--Yuri
HyperFriend13
2006-12-03 . chapter 4
Yay! Poor Demy-kun. I'd go out with him... don't know if he'd like me though. Zexion and Luxord made me laugh, and I'm so proud of Roxas! yay roxas! Oh, and prank calls in the other chapter were funny. Yeah, onto the next chappy!
Garangel
2006-11-25 . chapter 8
Nice um, past 8 chapters yeah, hilarious, funny, wierd, my three favorite things that fit with your story! Can't wait till ya update! ^_^
RoxasX
2006-10-23 . chapter 8
cool story i really like it.
Lunarsentry
2006-10-19 . chapter 8
ok there is something i have been needing to suggest. think about Marluxia and the man-eating plant from Little Shop Of Horrors.
So Zetta Slow
2006-09-29 . chapter 1
lol! XD
ChainedDarkness
2006-09-26 . chapter 8
LOL!

These are great!

Oh, oh, u shud do another pranks one!

I've got a good prank that my friend did.

Ok, so there is a sex offender/child molester in my neighborhood. And they like live really close to me. So, my friend went and hid, we didn't even realize she was gone(she was hiding in the BIG tree). So, we were screaming and yelling and looking all over for her. We were scared that she had gottne like, kidnapped and raped or something, my dad even went out in his car looking for her. Then like, right after my dad left she jumped out from the tree and was like,"HAHA! You guys fell for that!? HAHAHAHAHA!"
...yes...
XenaiiTwilightMoon
2006-09-12 . chapter 8
hahaha where did you get these ghost stories!? can you prank me, too lol?
Lunarsentry
2006-09-09 . chapter 2
hillarious im literally laughing out loud. keep up the late night hijinx
Ranchdressing
2006-09-08 . chapter 8
oh my! i wonder what the boys will do now..?
odi8200
2006-09-02 . chapter 1
AWESOME XD
BoxOfMudkips
2006-08-23 . chapter 1
Update Please!
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