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| TutorGirlml 2008-03-20 ch 152,  | abuseHey, I'm sorry it's been so long since I last commented on this story. I was really glad to get back to it and finally get to finish the last few chapters. You've just got this incredible saga here of all that Carmen and Flack have been through. I love how it all worked out, and that she was able to reconnect with her father. This just had such a perfect happy ending. I loved it! And any baby of Flack's would be incredibly adorable I'm sure! Thanks again for sharing this story with us. I'm excited now to have time to start reading your sequel. |
| Madison Bellows 2007-11-12 ch 152, | abuseYea, the baby is here! Cute name as well. Somehow I feel as though I lived through this pregnancy alongside Carmen. I already am looking forward to the sequel! |
| demolished-soul 2007-11-11 ch 152, | abuseI couldn't have thought of a better ending myself. I think it's a great end to a very long series. Well done! =) |
| Soccer-Bitch 2007-11-11 ch 152, | abuseLOVED IT! It was like everything that could go wrong, did. i hate those days. i can't wait for the next story. ^_^ |
| Sanqhian 2007-11-11 ch 152, | abuseA nice way to end it. Sanqhian |
| sparkyCSI 2007-11-11 ch 152, | abuseThat's okay. I think I got them all back to you and I sent you a chapter. I did bounce ideas back and forth with Cheryl on DV and she said not to end 38 there. So I'm going back to fill it in some more and resend it back to you. Yeah for Thomas Benjamin! |
| Charmedgrays 2007-11-11 ch 152, | abuseI Love it |
| Bluehaven4220 2007-11-11 ch 152, | abuseOh how sweet, it's a boy! YAY. I KNEW I'd be seeing Carmen and Flack chasing a little boy around the lab. More please |
| demolished-soul 2007-11-10 ch 151, | abuseOh, so the end of Simply Devine is coming soon? =( But I will be looking forward to the sequel. I'm glad Mac told Stella because, really, I can't see him keeping that to himself any longer. She's the only one who he confides in. Can't wait for the rest! |
| Charmedgrays 2007-11-10 ch 147, | abuseyou can name the baby Daneil aiden Flack if it is boy ore if it is a girl Jennifer aiden flack |
| Madison Bellows 2007-11-09 ch 151, | abuseYeah for Mac fessing up and even bigger yay to them having dinner! |
| Charmedgrays 2007-11-09 ch 22, | abusewho is this Cindy? is she this dancer that Flack went out whit? |
| Bluehaven4220 2007-11-08 ch 151, | abuseShort? Yes, but still enjoyable. YAY for Mac finally talking to Stella. update soon |
| sparkyCSI 2007-11-08 ch 151, | abuseI see that you sent me 3 chapters...Plus one for GH (I'll try to find the plot outline). DV is okay...Haven't written on it in a while. My muse is exhausted. :D I'll prob get them all back to you tonight! |
| Soccer-Bitch 2007-11-08 ch 151, | abuseLove the chapter. can't wait to see what will happen. hehehe I was so glad that I went last night. but today has been the day from hell. |