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| JelliWarrior 2007-08-10 ch 7, | abuseNeed... More... It such a good story... Please, may I have some more? |
| Ramenette 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abusei loved it. i never liked seradar. he kinda creeped me out. |
| Vickie1 2006-07-29 ch 7, | abuseGood job on this newest ch ;) Keep it up! |
| Anya Lation 2006-07-27 ch 6, | abuseVery interesting. I never really liked Saradar in the game, he kinda annoyed me. xD I thought Sophie was a good guy, though? Ah, who knows. She was kindof an anti-hero. :) perhaps there's a reason behind all of these villains returning... ;) Maybe everyone's favorite fae - *cough* I mean, villain will come in some time. :D |
| Vickie1 2006-07-26 ch 6, | abuseGreat chs, althrough, the last one with Seradar and Sophie as enemies sounds a little harsh. I kinda like them and they are good people in DF but this is your story and a good one too, so I shouldn't complain. Keep it up! I wanna see more :) |
| Mermaid Ninja 2006-07-24 ch 5, | abuseMaybe Tor and Roberta could elope. |
| Vickie1 2006-07-20 ch 3, | abuseAnother successful chapter! :3 Can't wait for the next! XD |
| Vickie1 2006-07-19 ch 2, | abuseNice start, can't wait for more ;) |
| thereissuedpsychiatrist 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI like what youve done with this,I think you can make a great story if you work on it |