*Criez* omg the ebding was perfecto!!

this is pretty good please update soon.

The interactions between the characters is very well done, as are Leon's inner thoughts. Excellent work!

Hello!

I read your story (obviously *grin*) and I really, really enjoyed it. You kept it easy to read by adding just enough description to play with the reader's imagination, but not so much that they can't handle it, and above all, you kept everyone in character. Good job there, because I've seen too many people miss that. I'm an Ada/Leon fan (fairly new, ever since I played Seperate Ways. That game totally changed my perspective on Ada) and thus I loved this story. I think you need to continue it. :-) Just a suggestion.

Robin Hicks

I LIKE IT ADA AND LEON FOREVER