This was really great. I was surprised to find fanfiction about Zorg, to be honest, but even more surprised to actually find a really good one. Your story was by far the best of the lot and I sure do hope you pick it up again sometime and finish it. You really did a great job fleshing out Zorg's character, while still keeping him close to his original version, if a little less crazy. And Rakat's a lot of fun. Plus, the backstory about the F-X War causing him to make weapons was super. Really good work.

Awesomeness.

A new story for me to read! I'm really glad I found this.

Darn, I read this a long time ago and must've forgotten to review, sorry. But it's going great, update fast! Informative backstory.

o...some history! Poor Zorg-still, if it hadna happened, he wouldn't be half as cool as he is *wink*, fantabulous chapter! Update again! Naja

Ah! An update, how wonderful, the plot thickens. :)

Okay, have Zorg's friend try to collect the bounty on him, then Zorg and Rakat flee back to earth being chased, and have him ask Corbon for help. That'll be a nice twist. Hope this helps!

OMG! I have been looking for a 5th element story 4ever! I also have a thing for Zorg, too, so... Hehe. Good job!

This is great! There is not enough Zorg stories out there, and the ones that are out there are long abandoned. I hape you plan on Updateing this soon, because you have got me hooked!

Amanda

Zorg looks bizarre in my mind, but much different, so he can stay undercover. . . may I be so dumb to ask what an F-X War is?

Rakat sounds like such a badass, and I think you're doing a very good job with writing her. Writing this will help you with your writing. Keep up the good work! :D

I love this story. Fa-la-la-la.

Well done on another fantastic chapter, many cookies for you and please update soon; I really need some more of this!

Kay x

don't worry about how to write Rakat-i think she writes herself admirably *grins* your doing a fantastic job and updates can't come soon enough! WIshing a fast pen and a willing muse to you! Naja

Yay! You updated! Thank you! This is great, really! I've got no objections or comments other than to say I hope to see more! Your characters are dynamic and intersting, sitting at seats edge! Naja

Gnah...

This is getting so good! I love it and please update soon, the best 5th element fic I've read.

I really enjoyed this, it's really well written and interesting. Please update soon, I'd love to read more.

Kay x

P.S. Adding to my story alert list.