If you know anything about historical writing, then you know that you have to cut your quotes down to necessities. Your beginning quote is too long, a third as long as the story.

You're right, it isn't 100% as creative as it could be.

The jump you make for Christine at the end, "These people have done wrong..." felt sudden. You go from her being insane/selfish to her justifying hurting others. Maybe emphasize the internal want for power more or something.

You wrote the movie none of it was you idea its all the movie.

I've reviewed this before, but I'm doing so again because I just reread it and realized how good it really is. I don't know what mental illness you had in mind for Christine, although she sounds schizophrenic (my older sister is schizophrenic, so it's something I know a little bit about). I do have one note, though...at one point, you've written 'Catherine' where you mean Christine.

Umm, anything new about this? Nope. We saw the whole same thing in the movie. Although, I must say that you wrote it in your own style. That's good. But not creative. (no offense though.)

This explains a lot...Christine's insanity, for starter's. I like to think that she really did love her daughter, attempted drowning or no...

Great story! Write more! _

The writing was good, as was the story, albeit a little short. It wasn't exactly the *best* thing I've read in a while, but a good 'fic nonetheless. One thing though.. You went from Christine to Catherine to Christine again.. Pick one. :p

Wow... Bril job! I watched the miniseries (and loved it) and I think your story outdoes it. Definately. I love the description you put into it! You should write a longer story of your own. With your vivid words and imagination, I'm sure it'd be great! Keep up the wonderful work!

Great story i loved it I love stories about my favorite 10k character the evil queen you should write the next part like were she poisons wendells mother and marrys the king or do a her POV of when she meets Virginia again or when she dies i would gladly read it

You should have put this in the Tenth Kingdom category, it's under TV shows. by the way, this is pretty good

Good. Very good.

Very good! It sounds like something that should have been in the book. Very nice, I'm impressed. I liked how you really seemed to know Catherine and the POV of the witch was great. There is a 10th Kingdom category that you can upload this to. It's under movies I think ;-) Later