Was this a one-shot? darn it! I realy liked it and was hoping for more.

Interesting take on Shinkouhyou. And contrary to what Snapped Chopstick said, I don't think it's too serious for him.

OOh, Shinkouhyou perspective! I found this perhaps a little too serious for him(*can't really say anything about that, herself* ; Bad me) given his role in the manga, but it's very, very good. And lord knows that he's hard enough to write as it is. A nice piece indeed.

Oooh very nice _ I like it. Shinkouhyou fics are so rare. Sugoi! I like the way it's written, it sounds a lot like him. More Shinkouhyou fics, pwease! _-

WOW! This is so cool...a brilliant piece of work on our favorite(?) clown! Shinkouyou is, even now, a mystery to me(might not be that puzzling to everyone else). But the way you wrote it sounds just like what Shin-chan would have in mind at that moment.

must admit, it's hard to get into that clown's head isn't it? XD i love anything shinkouhyou (or roushi, for that matter, bwakakaka)! even better if it's shinkouhyou doing intelligent thinking! hwakakaka! pity it's so short...

i liked your fic! Could you write a fic about Kibi and Kijin after Jyoka was defeated? Non-yuri though. A sister-sister relationship, that is. Could you do that for me please? Arigato gozaima a!

XD!

What shi likes the MOST is the line "The world has always been something to watch, rather than participate in; except, of course, when I disagree with the script."

VERY Shinkouhyou. But it's too short! *whine whine for more* If you're not planning on adding to this - can shi - ah, "borrow" that line? XDDD

As for the title renaming ...

Why not try spanish, pard?