Brilliant and heartbreaking, especiay Face's dialogue

Good you didnt have Face die.

I said this about your stories and other ilove Face and Hannibal as father and son. I think he tended to worry and think of Face like that more than the others.

I think the whole story is just sweet and great and really depressing and so on and...

But what is really depressing is that this could have been the best story I've ever read. But that last sentence...I don't know...The last sentence ios soppused to be the best...

but apart from that..rewally great!

worms

Aww...family isn't always blood. Sweet and cute.

Hi! :)

I liked your fic, and I've find that there are no Spanish fanfics about the A-team. Then, I wonder... would you let me make a Spanish translation of your fic? I'd love it.

This was a great story and I could tell that you thought about what feeling the team had about Face in this story.

wow i just love your stories Dana

i'm waiting to see more and the Hannibal's POV is just awesome

jazz

What a lovely story. Just long enough, with just enough wallow. Great stuff.

A pretty good story, it could use a little tightening up grammar-wise to flow better (needs some commas, and the verb tenses switch back and forth a few times between past and present tense). Could have also been longer, to give more time to develop Hannibal's (and the other guys') thoughts and feelings...like when they're waiting for the doctor to let them know Face's condition.

Wow. I remember seeing that episode rerun on TVLand. Awesome! I love the A-Team!

Hi Dana,

Love your story, it gives a clear, concise of what Hannibal's pov is. Maybe you should give Face's Point of view of what he is thinking at the time. of course, of how badly face is injured it maybe pretty difficult. But you can only guess.

Great job ! love to see more of your stories.

Take care Ginger :)

very nice. I like seeing the team, 'specially hannibal, when

they're vulnerable, since they almost never were on the show.

this was emotional, tense, and very well written. thanks.

Very effective P.O.V. piece

Wow. U wow. Brief, but incredibly moving. Well done!

Excellent story. I always thought they should have shown the viewers more of Face's struggle to survive. I've enjoyed all the stories Dana has written.