My personal opinion? This would make a nice Yu-Gi-Oh! story arc. Heaven knows the dub could use a little more originality...

I loved the little touches, like how Tristan kept humming "Kumbayah" And how Yugi got sick so gradually that I didn't notice anything until they realized he had a fever.

Also, thank you very much for not killing Yugi off. I was getting a little worried at the end there. :D

Comet7.

nice!!

This fanfic is super awesome. You're not writing anymore Yu-Gi-Oh? That stinks...you're really good at it^_^
Seto does need some love...

Your writing style is really coming along. This was a great story with really impressive use of oc's.

*Sobs* Mother of all anticlimaxes lol, but I enjoyed it none the less! Too bad you won't be writing any more YGO fics, its a shame to see good writers like you dissapear from the fandom, but I guess if it isn't getting you excited anymore there's nothing to be done! Good luck in your future projects!

+~Trikki~+

aw, it all done?

What a fantastic ending to a fantastic story. Cintya is so funny. She and Seto made a cute couple. Good job.

No, there can't be only one chapter left. *sigh* oh well, good job on the chapter. I'm so glad Kaiba's okay!

I'm reviewing! *Hugs the purple button of story love* Please update again soon! I'm waiting for a fluffy Pharaoh and Yugi moment! ^_^ In the meantime, good job with the characterisations!

+~Trikki~+

Aww...I hope things turn out well for Yugi. I'll cry if something worse happens to him. I think it's great what Kaiba did for everybody. Joey seems to have changed a lot since the whole ordeal began.

Wow that chapter was intense. Joey gets to the enemy and I get the dreaded feeling that Yugi just lost his own battle. Then of course, there's Yami, idiot Pharaoh indeed. Yami should know that Yugi and the gang are perfectly capable of getting into dangerous situations without him there, and now I have to wonder how he is going to find out about all of this since Yugi left the puzzle at home. I eagerly await the next update.

Great chapter. I hope everything turns out okay. Please update soon. ^_^

I'm so glad you updated. Great job on the chapter. I loved this phrase,“In my dreams, I would be in Japan and you would be on another planet."

Ooh, great chapter. I didn't realize the familial relationship between Massamina, Cintya, and Michael until now. THings are so intense. Fantastic job.

This chapter was so deep. I loved the insight on Joey and the references to earlier seasons. Great job. BTW, thanks for the props in the intro. *gives Mokuba plushie* That's for doing such a great job. Honestly, this chapter almost made me cry.