 BrooklynHiggans63 2008-07-17 . chapter 18this is seriously the best story ever! i could actually feel the emotions going on through the previous chapters and it seriously was riviting...i still don't know what that word means. i've read this story in 45 mins and it was really good! you almost had me in tears! anyway this is brooklynhiggans63, reporting live from your computure saying that you should hurry with the next chapter fast...some people are impatient! (coping that shortreport show thing on disney channel) The review is in and i'm out. sorry had too much sugar! Update!update!update!update! before i go all JOE JONEY KUNG FUEY on you! |
 Seren Maris 2008-06-29 . chapter 18I liked this story, and how it all came together in the end. I thought that you handled everyone's emotions and interactions really well.
There were a lot of really great scenes, but one of my favorites was Sky's breakdown in Chapter 16. I'm glad that everything worked out between him and Dane in the end, and how Jack gave him that "pep talk". ;) Great job! |
 guardianranger 2008-06-23 . chapter 1HI! Keep up with the good work |
 redasarose 2008-05-29 . chapter 18 i loved this story |
 JuseaPeterson 2008-05-29 . chapter 18Wow, that was an amazing story. I love how you did the aftermath of it all. Dane is now free, but I like how she wasn't able to make the decision easily or quickly.
It was a bit frustrating having everyone come to her, but it was good. I loved her thoughts and how she had to really think about what she wanted.
I loved her and Sky's talk and it's cool that she decided to stay.
Wonderful story. I hope to hear more from you soon. |
 Dannie Tomlinson 2008-05-28 . chapter 18Aww... Wonderful ending. Loved this. :D |
 princess moon shadow 2008-05-28 . chapter 18Love it! |
 Buffyxenaman 2008-05-28 . chapter 18Awesome job on the fic. |
 GinaStar 2008-05-28 . chapter 18I absolutely loved this chappie! ;) |
 Terrific Tina 2008-05-28 . chapter 17GReat chapter! |
 general-joseph-dickson 2008-05-28 . chapter 18Nice chapter. Well worth the wait. |
 Blue November 2008-03-05 . chapter 17that was an amazing chapter! im not sure i can say much more except maybe to throw in - don't make us wait so long for the next!
love and butter
-blue- |
 JuseaPeterson 2008-03-04 . chapter 17First off, sorry about your boyfriend, but you're right, it's life and that's that. :)
Thanks for updating. This was an amazing chapter. I love how you delved into Dane's thoughts and feelings, sadly it made me feel like I was right there with her. I was horrified, scared and upset and I hated Chris. I'm glad that it's out and now she's not classified as just a murderer.
I love how Bridge was there for her, comforting her and such. Also when Z stayed behind, that entire talk between them was just right and now Dane can move on.
I love how you ended the chapter with that peaceful feeling and such.
Wonderful chapter, as usual. |
 general-joseph-dickson 2008-03-03 . chapter 17Great Job. |
 princess moon shadow 2008-03-02 . chapter 17Love it! |