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BrooklynHiggans63
2008-07-17 . chapter 18
this is seriously the best story ever! i could actually feel the emotions going on through the previous chapters and it seriously was riviting...i still don't know what that word means. i've read this story in 45 mins and it was really good! you almost had me in tears! anyway this is brooklynhiggans63, reporting live from your computure saying that you should hurry with the next chapter fast...some people are impatient! (coping that shortreport show thing on disney channel) The review is in and i'm out. sorry had too much sugar! Update!update!update!update! before i go all JOE JONEY KUNG FUEY on you!
Seren Maris
2008-06-29 . chapter 18
I liked this story, and how it all came together in the end. I thought that you handled everyone's emotions and interactions really well.

There were a lot of really great scenes, but one of my favorites was Sky's breakdown in Chapter 16. I'm glad that everything worked out between him and Dane in the end, and how Jack gave him that "pep talk". ;) Great job!
guardianranger
2008-06-23 . chapter 1
HI! Keep up with the good work
redasarose
2008-05-29 . chapter 18
i loved this story
JuseaPeterson
2008-05-29 . chapter 18
Wow, that was an amazing story. I love how you did the aftermath of it all. Dane is now free, but I like how she wasn't able to make the decision easily or quickly.

It was a bit frustrating having everyone come to her, but it was good. I loved her thoughts and how she had to really think about what she wanted.

I loved her and Sky's talk and it's cool that she decided to stay.

Wonderful story. I hope to hear more from you soon.
Dannie Tomlinson
2008-05-28 . chapter 18
Aww... Wonderful ending. Loved this. :D
princess moon shadow
2008-05-28 . chapter 18
Love it!
Buffyxenaman
2008-05-28 . chapter 18
Awesome job on the fic.
GinaStar
2008-05-28 . chapter 18
I absolutely loved this chappie! ;)
Terrific Tina
2008-05-28 . chapter 17
GReat chapter!
general-joseph-dickson
2008-05-28 . chapter 18
Nice chapter. Well worth the wait.
Blue November
2008-03-05 . chapter 17
that was an amazing chapter! im not sure i can say much more except maybe to throw in - don't make us wait so long for the next!

love and butter
-blue-
JuseaPeterson
2008-03-04 . chapter 17
First off, sorry about your boyfriend, but you're right, it's life and that's that. :)

Thanks for updating. This was an amazing chapter. I love how you delved into Dane's thoughts and feelings, sadly it made me feel like I was right there with her. I was horrified, scared and upset and I hated Chris. I'm glad that it's out and now she's not classified as just a murderer.

I love how Bridge was there for her, comforting her and such. Also when Z stayed behind, that entire talk between them was just right and now Dane can move on.

I love how you ended the chapter with that peaceful feeling and such.

Wonderful chapter, as usual.
general-joseph-dickson
2008-03-03 . chapter 17
Great Job.
princess moon shadow
2008-03-02 . chapter 17
Love it!
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